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Tut mir Leid wegen dem " anonym... Vor einer Stunde " hab es kopiert und hier eingefügt ....
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. Da ja nun Ferien sind und kein Lehrer mein Text verbessern könnte habe ich mir gedacht , dass vielleicht jemand von euch meinen Text verbessern könnte.
Wäre sehr nett !
Birthday and Death Day It was the 11 th of semptember, a normal day, I thought. Okay not for John, my husband, because it was historischen birthday. On This Day he was a bit irritable ,because he had to work in the World Trade Centre. If I had known that something really horrible Happyend at that time I neuer would have let him go (to work). I had an unpleasant feeling, but at that time I didn't know why.... 7:45- John was going to his work, my chillen were going to school and I was staying at home. This unpleasant feeling , it was really strange and it didn't get out of my mind. Something in my head said that I have to go to the WTC to look After John.I thought I'm crazy but today I'm dumbfounded, because my mind was right. Because I didn't lost this strange feeling,I went to the Shopping Centre near the WTC. -Somewhat distraction wont do an harm- I thought. I was walking across the street while I saw a plane in the air. Suddendly I realized that the plane was flying towards the WTC. I was shocked. Then a loud noise resounded and the people were screaming and shouting, because the plane crashed into the WTC. ...... So das ist jetzt mal der Anfang meiner Short Story. Danke schonmal