Ich hoffe es passt aber würde mir gerne noch ne Meinung anhören:)

Application for a work experience placement in summer 2017

Dear Sir

I'm writing to apply for a work experience placement ar your company next summer. I have read your advertisment in the newspaper last week.

I am 16 years old and I have a good level of English. Currently I attend the 9th grade of a secondary school and when I graduate school I plan to study ...

I work hard, I'm friendly and I learn fast. I have also worked in a sports shop so I have both customer and teamwork experience.

Yours sincerely

Hallo miteinander İch schreibe am Donnerstag eine Klassenarbeit und wir sollen auf englisch eine Bewerbung schreiben. Ist das den korrekt so weit? Gramatikalisch und ob die zeit stimmt.

Dear mr/ mrs

I'm writting to apply for a work experience placement at your firm next summer. I read your advertisment in the newspaper last week.

I am 16 years old and I have a good level of English but would like to improve my spraking kills. Currently I attend the 9th grade of a secondary school and when I leave school I plan to study ...

I'm a hard-working friendly and a fast learner. I have also worked in a sports shop so I have experience in serving people and working in a team. Please find my CV with this letter. Yours sincerely