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Oral exam Hello. My name is ... , I am sixteen years old and I was born in ... but now I live in .... Family I have a mother, a father and a little brother. We live together in a big house. My mother’s name is Renate and she is 50 years old, she works in a hospital as a nurse. My father’s name is Gerd, he is 53 years old and works as a Case Manager. I have my own dog, she calls Rica and is a golden retriever (hybrid?). I also have a brother. His name is Piet and he is ten years old.I only have two grandmothers they both live in Emsbüren. My grandfathers are died before ich was born. So I don´t know how they exactly look like. Hobbies\Freetime My hobbies are playing volleyball and tennis in a club, which called Fc 47 Leschede. I also like to go on parties with my friends. Every monday i work with childen as a group leader. I do this together with Nele. And every thursday I pay attention to a child. I like to watch series on my computer. My favorite serie ist gossip girl. And sometimes I help my mother with the household. I have to clean the bathroom or make the wash. Living ... is a small village in Lower Saxony. But it is very nice to live here because you know many peopel so I have many friends. I live here with my family in a big house. Our house have a garden too. In the past we played there very often. I have my own room with a big bed in it. My brothers have an own room too. My school is also in ..., so my school way isn`t very long

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Oral exam Hello. My name is ... , I am sixteen years old and I was born
in ... but now I am living in .... Family I have a mother, a father and a
little brother. We are all living together in a big house. My mother’s name is
Renate and she is 50 years old. She works in a hospital as a nurse. My
father’s name is Gerd, he is 53 years old and works as a Case Manager. I
have my own dog, she is called Rica and she is a golden retriever (hybrid?).
I  also have a brother. His name is Piet and he is ten years old. I only
got two grandmothers and both of them are living in Emsbüren. My grandfathers died before ich was born, so I don´t really know how they actually look like.
Hobbies\Freetime My hobbies are playing volleyball and tennis in a club,
which is called Fc 47 Leschede. I also like to go on parties with my
friends. Every monday i work with childen as a group leader. I do this
together with Nele. I use to pay attention to a child every thursday.
I also like to watch some series on my computer. My favorite series is gossip girl.
Sometimes I help my mother with the household. Therefore, I have to clean the bathroom or do the dishes. I am Living ... is a small village in Lower
Saxony, but it is very nice to live here because you know plenty of people so thatI have got lots of  friends. I live here with my family in a big house, which has  a garden too. We used to play  there very often in the past. I have my own room with a big bed in it. My brothers has an own room too. My school is also in ..., so my school way isn`t very long.


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