DerLustmolch
31.01.2012, 16:03
Ich hab einen Lebenslauf auf englisch geschrieben und wollte wissen ob ich da was falsch gemacht hab

und was man noch verbessern kann

Hier der Lebenslauf:

Curriculum Vitae (CV)

Personal details: My full name is Max Mustermann, i am from Germany and my Date of Birth is the 18th of December 1999. My Adress is: Köllnerstraße 47, 79812 Dummhausen, Germany. Education: -My enrollment in elementary school was 4356 in the “Primarschule” Doofhausen in the first class. This school is in the Swiss. -Enrollment in the Doof primary school 1234, in the third class in Germany. -Enrollment in the Hans-Klaus-secondary school in the fifth class 1994 in Germany - hier sollte vorraussichtlicher schulabschluss stehen Work experience: An Intership in by MCDonalds and an Intership by BMW.

Additional skills and interests: My Hobbies are: playing football, playing saxophon, tequando My Interests are: football and IT

die angaben von hobbys, adressen und namen und die praktika sind erfunden in echt ist das was anderes!!

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Antwort
von Colima
31.01.2012, 16:12

Lustmolch,

Mach's einfach so:

Personal Details Date of birth: xx, xx, xxxx Place of birth: Doofhausen Nationality: xxxxx Eduation Lass die elementary school weg. Gib nur Deinen Abi oder Uni Abschluss - falls vorhanden -Name und Ort der Schule und Jahr des Abschlusses.

Positions held Internship, etc.

Skills and hobbies are usually not listed anymore unless you are very young and are just starting out.

Good luck!

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