Ist mein Text richtig?

Ich habe einen englisch Text geschrieben und wollte fragen, ob jemand sagen kann, ob der Text korrekt ist oder ob ich es anders schreiben soll. Er zählt nämlich stark zur Mitarbeit da wir momentan im Distance Learning sind. Danke im Voraus

Today the internet and social netwoSrks play a big role in our lives. One of the most widespread social networks in the world is Facebook. Anyone who is at least 13 years old according to their information can become a member. Many minors sign up on Facebook at the wrong age, but the parents don't know about it because the kids think the parents won't allow it. But should underage users use Facebook?

 The information minors give about themselves can be seen on Facebook (and other social networks as well) by everyone. So, I wonder if minors on Facebook are anonymous or their privacy is restricted. But there is only one answer: no, minors are not anonymous and yes, the privacy is restricted. No matter which person you are looking for information about, on the internet you can find everything. The privacy of these children is not safe and there are always hackers who use this opportunity to hack the children's accounts. Sometimes this cannot turn out well because the children have private pictures on their account that can be published. Facebook also stores all personal data and resells it.

Photos or videos are exchanged on Facebook. Fraudsters first create a fake profile and then post revealing pictures and false information. Within a short time, we try to get in contact with other users and persuade them to exchange pictures and videos with sexual content. In most cases, the fraudsters demand money to not publish the content, but experience has shown that paying for it does not protect against publication.

If misfortune happens to someone, it is filmed using a smartphone nowadays and can be presented to a large community in seconds. From there can start bullying on the internet. As the user's data is public it is dangerous as many stalkers stalk people for different reasons, for example, to steal their flat. Young people post a lot on social networks, where they are or while they are on holiday and it can be dangerous.

Finally, it can be said that Facebook is a danger for young people, as they are easily manipulable and the dangers that arise in dealing with strangers often underestimate. I also believe that parents should talk to their children about it and inform them about the dangers that happen on the internet.

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beim über fliegen sah alles ganz gut aus, bis auf am Anfang "netwoSrks"

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Ich würde sie fragen. Wenn sie nein sagen würde, könntest du ihr ja sagen, dass es ein Missverständnis war und du dich einfach mal so mit ihr treffen wolltest oder so. Außerdem kostet fragen ja nix c;. Oder du wartest, bis alle wieder in die schule dürfen, und versuchst mehr zeit mit ihr zu verbringen, bis sie dich fragt. Viel glück bei dem was du machst.

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Wenn es mit kabel ist, funktionierts. Aber ohne hat bei mir noch nie geklappt. Wenn du dir jetzt aber schon eins ohne kabel gekauft hast, kannst du das Headset nehmen, das bei der PS schon dabei war. Das drückt zwar bissl im Ohr, aber du kannst halt mir deinen Leuten reden.

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