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Hey ...,

Last week me and my family went to Australia.

My brother booked a hotel in Sydney,in our hotel is a pool bc it’s hot in Australia.

In the first day we went to the Tarobga zoo there we saw kangaroos,tigers,elephants,koalas and gorillas.

On the second day we went to the bonding beach because it was very sunny and hot

There me my brother and my dad went swimming,my mum didn’t come bc she didn’t like it.

She wanted to get sun.On the last day we went to the harbor bridge.We had to buy a ticket first,then we could climb it.My whole family climbed the bridge.I was scared of heights but now I’m not.You could so beautiful things from up there

I saw a little bit of the uluru(Ayers rock) too and I heard the tourists can’t climb the uluru bc it’s sacred for the aborigines.