Was heißt "The situation surpasses me."?

Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏

hallöchen,

kann mir jemand den Unterschied zwischen den Stylistic Devices metaphor und Imagery erklären?

danke

We ... (have) enough time now if we hadn't wanted to see the castle.

was kommt da anstatt diese ... rein? ich habe geschrieben would have had aber das ist falsch.

Kann ich statt "the situation surpasses me" auch sagen "the situation overwhelmes me"? Kann man das synonym verwenden?

Heyy,muss eine Figurenkonstellation machen und brauche dafür kreative Ideen z.B wie den Charakter als playmobil figuren darzustellen etc…

Die Figur ist Hazel Grace Lancaster

Nowadays the internet is becoming a bigger concern due to its unlimeted access. So its getting riskier to be online especially for children as there are many threats, such as fake profiles. However, is the internet really that dangerous?

First of all, I think the internet makes us very dependet, which can lead to developing addidictive behaviors, impacting both our personal lives and careers. For example during a family dinner, there is less conversation and more time spent surfing the internet. This can lead to conflict, just as when someone constantly checks their phone at work or in the school.

The next point is we are not always aware of the dangers online, because the internet is has become part of our everday life. From my point of view is this a big Problem, especially for young people, because they can visit websites that aren’t safe for them. For instance it can also be dangerous for children, as older people can pretend to be younger and attract children.

The next argument is that the internet also offers many benefits, such as educational plattforms, that help young people study for school. In my experience the internet provides learning materials and online courses, for example, which can help save time by avoiding long commutes.

Lastly its important to say that the internet make it easy to do many things online, which is often faster. For example shopping online is usually easier than going to a store especially when time is short.

All in all I can say the internet has good and negatives sites. One the one hand is the internet not good for children, because there are many dangers on the internet, on the othder hand you can benefit from internet.

Hallo,

ich habe eine Frage zu participles im Englischen:

Ist es egal, wie das participle im Satz steht und sind alle Sätze grammatikalisch richtig?

The woman, speaking English very well, watched TV.

Speaking English very well, the woman watched TV.

UND

Waiting at the bus station, the boy thought about the day.

The waiting boy at the bus station thought about the day.

The boy, waiting at the bus station, thought about the day. 

Danke für Hilfe!!!

„Es war ein Sirren in der Luft, das sich über das Haus konzentrierte und…“ ist Sirren eine Lautmalerei oder nicht weil das Geräusch ja nicht nachgestellt wurde?

Ich möchte in einem Jahr die Aufnahmeprüfung für das Gymnasium machen. Allerdings habe ich im Deutsch ein kleines Problem. Man muss am Ende der Deutsch Prüfung einen Aufsatz schreiben. Dieser Aufsatz hat ein vorgegebenes Thema. Meistens ein Gefühl. Z.B.

• Angst
• Wut
• Mut
• Freude

ect...

Ich muss dann ein Bericht über eine Situation schreiben in der ich einmal Angst oder ein anderes Gefühl hatte. Mir fällt dann nie eine gute Situation ein

1. Die zum Thema passt
2. Zu der es etwas zu beschreiben gibt

Was soll ich tun?

Wäre eventuell jemand so lieb und könnte sich jemand meine Zusammenfassung anschauen über die USA beziehungsweise deren Einwohner besonders wegen der Grammatik, also den Tenses und der Word order? Das wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Hier ist der Text dazu:

Meine Zusammenfassung:

The text is about the US and its immigration history. Today it is called a nation of immigrants. But thousands of years ago, only Native Americans lived there. The famous railroad that we know today was built by immigrants from Japan and China who came in the middle of the 19th century. A lot of German people came to the US but some of them left because they were discriminated. When some of them stayed, they started a new life mainly in Pennsylvania but later they decided to start a new life in Wisconsin, Michigan, Minnesota, North and South Dakota, Nebraska and Iowa. Ellis Island is known as a museum in New York today but in the past it was called "The Isle of Tears" because when immigrants wanted to go through, they had to prove their good health and they had to be able to write and read. When they could neither read nor write and didn‘t have a good health, they were sent back home. The people who wanted to immigrate into the US had a lot of problems since, in 1924, the US government passed "The Immigration Act“ and people from poorer countries weren‘t allowed to go to the US. Today, if people want to live in the US, they need a greencard which allows them to live and work in the US. People are given 50000 greencards all around the world each year, so there‘s a chance for everyone to immigrate to the US. 

Habe meine english lehrerin gefragt was der fehler bei einem meiner sätze ist. Sie hat mit mir sicher 5-10 min überlegt ob mein satz richtig ist oder nicht. Danach sagte Sie das Sie sich ein wenig Zeit nehmen wird und mir eine Mail schreibt wenn Sie herausfinded was das Problem hier ist. Der punkt wäre schon wichtig für mich weil ich dieses Semester noch einen 5.5 schnitt im englisch haben will (schweizer Noten)

Hier die Mail:

You wrote: Mike saw it before they could`ve ran off. (could have plus past participle run)

It should read: Mike saw it before they could have run off. Or, Mike saw it before they ran off.

Hat Sie recht oder ist mein satz richtig?

Könnte sich eventuell bitte jemand meinen Text durchlesen und auf die Grammatik vor allem schauen? Danke!

,,I had been at school in X before I came to Y and it had been terrible in X. I didn‘t have any friends there because there were a lot of groups which were formed and some of them talked about me. I was left out by my "best friend“ who replaced me by someone else and that is how everything started. All of my classmates were mean to me and even the teachers were against me except my maths teacher. I don‘t know why they did that. Honestly, I was a very shy person, so I only talked to people who I felt comfortable with. I think that was the reason. I found new friends from other classes but as soon as my classmates knew that I had found a new friend, they came to them and told something about me, so I was lonely again. They did that for about 5 times but I still don‘t know what they told about me. I only know that they didn‘t want to talk to me anymore after my classmates had told them something about me. Obviously, it had to be something bad that was the reason for not talking to me. On 1st December 2021, it was even worse the girls of my class came together and they formed a circle in which they talked about my and made prejudices. Yet I still don‘t know what they exactly told about me because I only heard my name for multiple times and while they were talking about me, they often looked at me. Therefore, I decided to ignore them until I would leave this school. It didn‘t matter what they said, I completely ignored them. Of course I couldn‘t ignore my teachers who were also mean to me but at least I didn‘t speak to my classmates. On 31st January 2022, I was finally allowed to leave that school and came to this school where I have been since then.“

Kann das bitte wer übersetzen?

people say things without thinking to get certain things but then once they have it or they don't get it they leave. That's why I don't get into a relationship so quickly

Könnte jemand bitte über meinen Text über Martin Luther King Jr. drüber schauen? Vor allem, was die Grammatik und die Informationen angeht. Wäre sehr lieb, danke!

Martin Luther King Jr. was born in Atlanta, so in Georgia on 15th of January in 1929. He was an important person in the past since he was the leader of the African American civil rights movement and peace movement. He fought for the rights of both African Americans and white Americans after the civil war. Furthermore, he said that he had a dream and this speech has influenced the government of the U.S. because he wanted to reach the goal that every human should have the same rights. He organized a march on Washington to protest against the rights of blacks. He even won a nobel prize in 1964 as he did it that both African American and white Americans have had the same rights. Sadly, he was shot in the Lorraine hotel in Memphis on 4th of April in 1964 which is part of a American civil rights museum now. The Martin Luther King day is celebrated every third Monday in January now. 

Wie findet ihr meine Argumentation. Ich freue mich über eine Bewertung.

Aufgabe: Never mary someone your parents didn't approve of. Do you agree?

Living a life with full of love is maybe one of the most important things in life. Especially then, when you find your biggest love, the person with whom you want to spend the rest of your life. But in many cultures this doesn't work like that. For example in India, the parents get to decide who their child will marry. By that the question arises, if parents should approve a marriage. 

Firstly, a marriage doesn't just happen. If two people want to engage, they think about it. That's also the reason that some couples break up with each other. They realize that love doesn't mean mean the same for them, e.g. they think differently about love. Just like parents do. They come from a different timeline. Oftenly they're 20 to 30 years older than their child which leads to the matter of fact that their mindset is completely different, than their childs. By asking the parents for approve, you will not get a correct answer because you're the only one who knows, what's the best for you and who fits you the most. 

Secondly, as time goes on we get older. By that we have to take responsibility for our choices. In order to do that, we have to choose between things and decide. Marriage is such a choice. If somebody can't decide, wether he/she wants to marry its partner or not, then he has to rethink his/her love life, but asking the parents (or others) is immature because you do not take responsibility. If can't decide, then I'm not ready for marriage. 

To sum up, asking the parents for approval is wrong. It's only you who can make the right decision, who can decide, what's important for him/her and what's not and if she/he is really the right one. 

Ich habe in einer Englischarbeit geschrieben: ,,He told them to dont look away.“ Meine Englisch Lehrerin hat mir dafür einen Fehler angestrichen.Ich habe mal gegoogelt, aber es gibt keine Ergebnisse.Kann mir jemand helfen?

Ich muss einen 2 seitigen Aufsatz über das zu spät kommen schreiben,weil meine halbe Klasse zu spät gekommen ist und der Lehrer aber alle dafür bestraft hat was ich ziemlich ungerecht finde und da wollte fragen wie ich zwei Seiten schreiben formulieren und Tricks damit Mann nicht so viel schreiben muss

Hallo!

Wie findet ihr diesen Leaflet? Die bullet points waren:

• explain why it is important to protect the environment in your area
• advise tourists on how to save resources on their holiday
• encourage tourists to use local products and services

Going green

How green is Wildalpen?

Wildalpen may be a small village, but that doesn't mean that it can't do a lot against climate change. With a population of just 450 people, Wildalpen is one of the smallest towns in Austria, but their participation in making our planet greener is huge. This small village contains a lot of forests and sources. That is the reason why Wildalpen's focus is set on water and trees. Nearly every source is protected and is used for local water consumption. Moreover, it is not allowed that trees are cut down, but rather they try to make the forests healthier with more biodiversity.

What can I do while I am here?

As a tourist, you can also contribute to making Wildalpen green. You should not throw away your dust in nature and stay in an eco-friendly hotel. If you arrive by train and not by car, you can reduce your carbon emissions too. In your hotel, do not ask for towels to be changed every day and turn off the lights and air conditioning when you leave your room.

Why should you go local?

We can protect our environment by using sustainable local resources. It is important to eat at local restaurants that use food grown in the area, to support them and the local farmers who try to be as eco-friendly as possible. On the one hand, this contributes to our local economy. On the other hand, this cuts down on a lot of emissions since the food doesn't need to be transported over long distances.

Enjoy your stay in Wildalpen and help us keep it clean and green for future generations!

For further information, visit our website: www.goinggreen.at

Hii, beim Deutschabi dieses Jahr hab ich mich für die Erörterung Woyzecks entschieden. Die Frage war, ob oder inwiefern Groczyks Ansicht, dass Marie nur ihre Rechte als Frau geschützt habe, zutrifft.

Mich würde mal interessieren, wie viele bzw. welche Argumente ihr so eingebracht habt :)

Ich hatte nämlich nur 4 Argumente, jeweils 2 Pro und 2 Con, dafür aber sehr ausführlich und weit ausgeholt, also trotzdem um die 1500 Wörter.

Wie findet ihr diesen Article in Englisch? Die Fragestellung war:

• what does your school do against climate change
• what is hard about it
• what do you do personally against it

Is the environment important for your school?

Have you ever thought about the importance of the environment? Usually, schools don’t care enough about this topic, but it does not have to be like this. Our commercial college tries to make the world a better place.

Our school organizes several activities like collecting litter. Furthermore, we save energy by replacing light bulbs with energy-saving lamps and we turn off the heating and the lights when we don’t need them. Another important aspect is that we can visit some very interesting lectures about environmental change.

But it always sounds easier than it is in reality. We have to give up a lot if we want to succeed. We are not allowed to print out a lot of texts; we have to make sure that our computers are powered off if we don’t need them. I also have to mention that we try to make as few emissions as possible even when we go on a trip. For example, we try to avoid planes and prefer electric vehicles.

But we can never do too much for the environment. That is the reason why we should also care about it in our free time like I do. I only buy organic food, never drink from plastic bottles, and I do not wrap my food in plastic. Last but not least, our daily routine has to change too. Not every student can drive a car to school. We should use public transportation instead or found a carpool.

So, in conclusion, what are the key points to bear in mind if you want to save our planet? To sum it up, three things are important: don’t waste electricity, avoid plastic, and make use of public transportation. On the one hand, it is not always easy to live an eco-friendly life. On the other hand, it is worth it because we can all benefit from a healthy planet.

Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob jemand wieder bitte über meinen Text drüber schauen könne. Wäre sehr lieb, danke!

,,I have been living in the US since Monday because I wanted to start a new life. I had really wanted to go to the US before I really arrived here. It‘s very fantastic here and the people are very friendly although I‘ve only been here for one week. When I arrived at the airport in Boston on the first day, I thought that I could never live in such a crowded and large nation. But then I met a woman and she cared for me. She has become my friend. She showed me the airport and different cities. At first, we went to California where I explored different cities, such as Los Angeles and San Francisco. I went to Disneyland there and it was so much fun. I also saw the Golden Gate Bridge with its fantastic view. I even saw real Native Americans on their reservations! They looked very friendly at me but I am also sorry for them that they have to live outside. I am very happy that I‘ve immigrated to the US. After exploring California, I went to New York where I have been living now since Wednesday. It‘s so cool here because when I came to New York, it was already late in the evening and because of the darkness, I went to Times Square since it is known for its bright lights. I went to a restaurant there where I ate the popular pizza slices and they tasted very delicious. After I had eaten, I was exploring Times Square while it was pretty dark and because of the bright lights of the advertisements, it was so gorgeous and I felt like it would be my home town so that I‘ve decided to stay here in New York forever. I live in an apartment in New York with my new friends as long as I don‘t have enough money to buy my own house. I work in the Empire State Building where I work as an official and I really like living here!“

Könnte jemand mal über meinen Text vor allem wegen der Informationen und der Grammatik drüber schauen? Danke, wäre sehr lieb!

,,Lakota is a Native American tribe and they lived in America at first. Now they live in South and North Dakota. Lakota people are nomadic hunters and gatherers and they kill buffaloes to stay alive. The food is poor, so they need to kill buffaloes. They are strongly connected with the nature. They are a part of larger Sioux Nation which consists of Lakota, Dakota and Nakota. They wear headdresses with feathers and they have been a part of North American history for over 500 years. They have their own language and traditions such as Sun Dance. Sun Dance is a tradition that includes fasting, praying, and dancing to honor the sun. Another famous tradition is Vision Quest where people go on a journey in nature to seek personal revelation and spiritual growth. But they also have a strong tradition of storytelling, telling legends, and teaching from one generation to the next. Lakota is also very known for its history because in the 19th century, an argument between European settlers, the U.S. government and their tribe broke out and their tribe fought against them. Sitting Bull and Crazy Horse were the chiefs of their tribe and they protected them. They also fought against the U.S. government because they wanted to keep their land. They also did it but more arguments broke out after they had done it for the first time, so, after all, they lost their land nevertheless. Today they live on reservations.“

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wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Informationen zu ergänzen habt, dann gerne her damit! :)

Hallo. Mein Sohn bekommt einen Tadel und gleichzeitig eine Suspendierung weil er beim Spielen mit Mitschülern einen Stein warf ohne zu überlegen. Zum Glück ohne jemanden getroffen zu haben. Dies war auch nicht seine Absicht. Daraufhin bekam er einen Tadel und eine Suspendierung von 2 Tagen. Er weiß wie dumm das war und sieht es auch ein. Zusätzlich soll er einen Aufsatz verfassen zu fahrlässiger Körperverletzung. Meine Frage dazu. Darf man einen Tadel und gleichzeitig suspendieren ? Und darf man ihn zwingen dieses Aufsatz vor der Klasse vorzutragen ? Ich halte das für eine Nötigung und eine Bloßstellung. Vor den Mitschülern. Danke euch.

Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob mal jemand über meinen Text drüber schauen könnte. Wäre echt sehr lieb, danke!

,,My parents come from Kazakhstan and my mother came to Germany when she was 12 years old. My father came to Germany when he was 15 years old. They were forced to leave their home country by their parents because they wanted to start a new life and they were only teenagers, so they weren‘t allowed to decide whether they would stay in Kazakhstan or go to Germany. I was born in Germany and I can‘t speak Russian. I really like Germany because of the people but if I had to leave Germany, I would definitely go to Spain since it is a very interesting, warm and gorgeous country. I can‘t stand cold days, so it would be a perfect country for me. There are several beaches and unique sights such as the castle in Madrid. But nevertheless, a war or bad government would have to happen so that I would leave Germany because then it would be really bad to live in Germany as you wouldn‘t be treated well. But if I really had enough money, I would try to immigrate to Spain. I would hope that the people would be friendly to me and understand that I wouldn‘t be able to speak their language at first but I even think that I wouldn‘t be able to speak Spanish fluently even if I learned it for several years because it is a difficult language. I would also hope that the life would be great there and I would make new friends. I think I would also have a lot of problems for example missing my family and my friends and I would have problems with speaking their language. I would be afraid of talking to them since perhaps they would make fun of me or would talk to me in an unfriendly way. It would be a complete change for me and I would have to get used to new habits for example going to another school. On the other hand, it would be great to experience new adventures and explore new locations. You could go to a beach every day! So, on the one hand, I would really like to go to Spain but on the other hand, I would be really afraid of leaving my home country because of the problems that could "destroy“ my life. I am not sure whether I stay here in Germany or go to an other country.“

Mir wurde gerade von einem Mädchen (nach ihrer Angabe 6. Klasse) gesagt, dass sie einen Aufsatz mit 15000 Wörtern innerhalb eines Tages schreiben muss. Ich wollte nur einmal nachfragen ob ihr davon schonmal gehört habt? Ist sehr unglaubwürdig interessiert aber trotzdem.

Freue mich auf Antworten.

Ich plane momentan einen Aufsatz/Erörterung/Essay zu schreiben. Einfach weil ich Lust dazu habe. Aber mein Ziel ist es in erster Linie, den Lesern eine andere Perspektive näherzubringen und sie zum Denken anzuregen; nebensächlich ist es, sie von meiner Meinung zu überzeugen. Es wird um Abtreibung gehen.

Wenn ich also beginne zu schreiben, sollte der Anfang möglichst viele Leser neugierig machen, weiterzulesen. Ich würde mit einer These beginnen und diese dann anhand von Argumenten und Beispielen belegen/erklären. Ich bin mir aber nicht sicher, ob es nicht vielleicht die Zielgruppe abschreckt, wenn ich den Aufsatz mit einer starken (möglicherweise sogar radikalen) These anfange. Die schreibe ich jetzt nicht hier hin, es wird aber wohl sowas sein wie „Abtreibung ist nicht unethisch". Was denkt ihr? Sollte ich das lassen und es ans Ende schreiben? Oder gar nicht?
Immerhin will ich Abtreibungsgegner zum Lesen bringen, nicht dazu, den ersten Abschnitt zu überfliegen und sich abzuwenden, weil „da lernt man eh nix“ und „die hat keine Ahnung“.

Könnte jemand eventuell bitte über meinen Text über Deutschland drüber schauen? Danke!

,,Germany is the most populated country in Europe. The population is about 84 million and it is in Central Europe. The capital of Germany is Berlin. Germany is a popular and interesting country because of its history. The second world war was begun by Germany by fighting with Poland. Adolf Hitler was like a president and he thought that Germany would be the best country ever. He killed a lot of people who lived in Germany but actually were from an other country. But suddenly on 30th of April 1945, he killed himself in Berlin. On 9th of May the war was finished and Europe was called "the United States of Europe". That is the reason why Europe has become peaceful. In 1961 a wall which was called Berlin wall was built to separate East and West Germany because the East Germans weren‘t allowed to flee into West Germany. But in 1990, the wall was destroyed and Germany has become a united nation since then. As you can see, the history of Germany was very interesting. German is also known for its special "meals“ such as beer, "Bretzel“, sauerkraut, and ,,Currywurst“ which is a special type of a sausage. Germany has the advantage that people come to Germany from all over the world and they are treated well. Most people come from Turkey, Russia, Kazakhstan and Poland. There are a lot of sights in Germany since Germany consists of 16 federal states. German corner is in Koblenz and there‘s a statue of William, the first German emperor, and it is very gorgeous there. You can explore the natural location there and just relax. Another famous sight is the Cologne cathedral which is a gorgeous catholic church. In my opinion some people could be much friendlier as they sometimes stare at you or talk to you in an unfriendly way. But of course there are also very kind people."

Hallo. Könnte mal eventuell jemand über meinen Text über die USA drüber schauen? Wäre echt lieb von euch, danke! Und wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Sachen zum Text ergänzen würdet (Themen, wie z.B. die Bevölkerung usw), dann gerne her damit!
,,The US are in North America. America is a Continental and it consists of South America, Central America and North America. The US are very popular since they created a lot of things like McDonald’s and so on. It is very cool there because of the many sights such as the Statue of Liberty which you can see in many pictures. You can see a lot of cool things of the US have become so popular. Today the population of the US are about 330 million. The capital is Washington, D.C and people come there from all over the world. People from Mexico, Central or South America are called Hispanics or Lations. Their first language is often Spanish, so the US don‘t have a national language since more than one third of the population speaks Spanish in some areas and that is why most of the signs are in Spanish and English. There are about 2,5 million Native Americans and most of them live on reservations. When white immigrants came to America in the 17th century, they fought against the Native Americans because they wanted to get their land and after they had won, most of Native Americans had to leave their land and they had to live on reservations. Today, they still live on reservations and they are very poor. They don‘t have any jobs, so they try to earn money by keeping traditions such as the powwow. It is a celebration of American Indian culture. They sing, feast and dance there. Native Americans such as the Cherokees are one of the most popular Indian tribes of the US and they live in the South of the US. Another popular tribe are the Navajos who live in the Southwestern of the US. In 1883 there were 4 million black Americans and they didn‘t have the same rights as white Americans, so people like Malcolm X fought for the rights of black people. Today about 40 million black Americans live in the US. As you can see, the US had a lot of problems in the past but it is still a very cool nation.“

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ich wäre euch echt dankbar!

Könnte mal jemand eventuell bitte über meine Zusammenfassung über die Geschichte von Annie Moore drüber schauen? Danke!
,,The story is about Annie Moore who was the First immigrant on Ellis Island. Annie and her two younger brothers are in Ireland in 1891 and they want to board a ship which brings them to New York since their parents and their older brother are there. Annie is very sad because she thinks that she won‘t ever see the beautiful things such as the Emerald Isle again but on the other hand she is happy to see her family again. Her parents had to emigrate because of the potato famine in Ireland in 1845. It is very hard to live on the ship as it is crowd, cold and the food is poor but on January 1st, 1892 the ship reaches New York and Annie is the first person who leaves the ship and arrives on Ellis Island. She even gets $10 as a reward to be the first person on Ellis Island and she had never got so much money before. That‘s the reason why she is so happy. Now, there‘s a statue of Annie on Ellis Island.“

Also bei einer Erörterung

Hey, ich bin aktuell in der 10. Klasse (Realschule, Bayern)

Und schreibe morgen meine 3. Schulaufgabe. Dabei muss ich eine zweigliedrige Erörterung mit insgesamt 6 Argumenten verfassen.

Für das ganze hab ich 260 Minuten Zeit.
Nun hat heute meine Lehrerin gesagt, ich sollte die Einleitung etwa eine halbe Seite groß schreiben. Meine Frage ist jetzt aber, wie ich ne halbe Seite füllen kann, wenn die Einleitung eigentlich nur aus einem Einleitungsgedanken, einer Hinführung zum Thema und der eigentlichen Themenfrage besteht.

Könnte mir vielleicht jemand Tipps geben, wie ich die Einleitung ein wenig Strecken kann?

Schönen Abend noch:)

Hallo, kann sich wer bitte meinen Text mal anschauen und mir ein Feedback bezüglich Fehler Aufbau Inhalt geben. Im Anhang habe ich auch das Lösungsblatt angefügt.

Dear readers,

in the following text I speak about the topic the role of sports among young people. The text based on the cartoon from pinterest. The role of sports in children‘s life has changed.

The cartoon shows two parts divided into the years 1998 and 2018. In the forderground of the part of 1998 can you see a mother, who stops a boy. Next to the boy is a ball. The mother pulls hin in the house against he will. The part two of year 2018 shows the mother with the boy too. But the mother pulls the boy out of the house against he will. The Boy is holding a game console in his hands. In both parts acts the mother vigorously to get him in and out of the house. Furthermore can you see in both parts, that the boy does not seem pleased to have to finish his activity.

I think the cartoonist is intended to show, that the young generation spend variously sporty activities in the past and today. In year 1988 the boy wants to spend his free time outside playing ball games. The boy in year 2018 wants to play games inside on his game console.

I agree with the cartoonist, because playing online games are very popular at present and are the new trend under young people. A lot of teenager spend a lot of time inside and playing game console. But this have for the young generation negative consequenses. I think playing online games are very bad for the Health of young generation. Because of, the people get not enough movement and this can lead for example to overwight. On the top the youngs start to meet gaming friends instead of their real friends. Through this the youngs lost the realitiy. An another big consequense is that the childrens could become a addict. So, the young generation get not even physical but also a mental health problem.

In summary I can say that the kind of doing sport are different in the past and now. Today, the role of sport for childrens focused in playing online games.

• Zum Beispiel eine Entscheidung oder Handlung auszuführen.

Meine Übersetzung:

• 1) For example to carry out a decision or an action
• 2) oder For example, to carry out a decision or action.

Ich möchte die erste Formulierung in einer englischen Textproduktion verwenden, sie sollte also möglichst gebildet und schön klingen, aber ich bin mir nicht sicher, ob sie korrekt ist. Genauso verhält es sich mit „it is important being aware of the grievances at hand and take action.“ Es wäre super, wenn mir jemand helfen könnte. Danke schonmal!

Hey, ich muss für Deutsch einen Blog Eintrag schreiben. Das Thema ist: Die Rolle des Internets als Ersatz für Bücher. Es sollen insgesamt ca. 230 Wörter sein. Ich habe auch schon nach Informationen gesucht, aber irgendwie nichts gefunden. Wisst ihr vielleicht etwas? Vielen Dank schon mal im Voraus!

Hey!

Vielleicht kann sich jemand von den Englisch Profis mal meine Übung zum Partizip ansehen & nachgucken, ob alles richtig ist.

People watching (People who are watching) a demonstration often do not realize what it takes to organize such an event.
I talked to Kyle T., an animal rights activist. Because regularly organising (Because he regularly organises) demos against factory farming, ...
After having planned (After you have planned) your demo, the next thing is to tell the local police.
When having been informed (When they have been informed), they can plan how they are going to deal with it.
You should also give clear instructions to all the people attending (people who are attending).
For example, people demonstrating (people who are demonstrating) for the rights of farm animals shouldn't carry posters against child labour.
However, the most important thing is that everybody involved (everybody who is involved) should act peacefully.
If feeling (If they feel) positive about the demonstrators, people are more likely to support the case!

Title: Report on DoctorsIntroduction: Doctors are important people who help keep us healthy. This report talks about doctors and how much money they make and if they like their job.Salary: Doctors get paid different amounts depending on what kind of doctor they are and how long they've been working. Usually, doctors make a good amount of money, especially if they specialize in something. Even though becoming a doctor takes a lot of schooling, they usually earn enough money to live comfortably.Job Satisfaction: Some doctors really like their job because they get to help people and see them get better. But sometimes, being a doctor can be stressful. Still, many doctors feel happy because they can make a difference in people's lives.Conclusion: In the end, doctors are important in our lives. They earn good money and often feel satisfied with their work, even though it can be hard sometimes.

ist dieser report für englisch gut?

Hat jemand Ideen für einen Text mit dem oben genannten Titel? Oder kann jemand einen für mich vorschreiben? Ich verstehe diese Aufgabe einfach nicht und bin komplett unkreativ.

Hallo ich habe einen essay geschrieben über compulsory first aid courses for fourteen year olds und das ist ein maturabeispiel gewesen und ich wollte fragen, ob jemand das durchlesen könnte und es bewerten könnte, welche note das wäre, vor allem mit den fehlern und so. Ich habe den Text komplett alleine geschrieben und das in 20 Minuten, weil bei der Matura haben wir sehr wenig Zeit für zwei Texte also nur eine Stunde. Ich würde mich echt freuen. :)

Nowadays young people has access to more goods like education. In our modernity, they can extend their knowledge pretty easily as technology, for instance, is spread all over the world and as they can attain school which offers a ton of diverse subjects. However, people still argue that many of these don’t teach valuable lessons about the real life. Instead, young people already want to accomplish experiences that educate them for certain situations, perhaps helping someone out in hazardous situations. In result of these arguably issues, people suggest signing 14-year olds up for compulsory first aid courses.

Compulsory first aid courses can be ideal and influential for young people collecting more real life based experiences. Moreover, they can even give them an insight on how a situation can alter in only one instant and how people can put themselves in danger, precisely fighting against death. Teaching sessions about helping someone, in terms of surviving, can reflect young people’s interests. Some students already complain on having deplorable teaching sessions at school, regardless of their subject area. Maths, science, biology,  physics might enforce their intellectual thoughts but what about focusing on their mind set. Are they even that mentally stable to handle emergency situations? Would they even risk themselves to help someone out after they crashed their car into a tree? Are they even willing to sacrifice themselves and is it even worth?

At this point, students would take school more seriously as compulsory first aid courses influence students mental mind set. In this case, the integration of first aid courses into school is essential for young people. 14 year olds must bear the importance of life teaching sessions. So, the government need to go after their obligations to pay these courses. After all, education should be free and accessible to everyone. School subjects should not only consist of languages or natural sciences, but the government also have to consider the fact that students have to train their cognitive skills as well.

Moreover, the government can also detect people’s reactions would shape in a deferential way if the education system would be more comprehensive and creative. I mean, how can someone not find it intriguing that the education system develops more on its way to be immaculate. It would pique everybody’s curiosity how young people desirably helps out to change the world into a better place. Knowledge has the power for it.

In conclusion, it can be said that if someone comes up with compulsory first aid courses, it should be already associated in the school’s education system. Fourteen year old should be, at this degree, handle emergency situations and activate their human instincts to sacrifice themselves. 

Hallo zusammen

Ich muss in Deutsch eine Geschichte schreiben und dabei gibt es zwei Wörter die ich nicht weiss ob ich sie gross oder klein schreiben muss. Die grossgeschriebenen Wörter unten in den beiden Sätzen betrifft es.

1. Ich weiss das ich jetzt nichts FALSCHES sagen darf, denn sonst bin ich noch länger im Krankenhaus.
2. Ich beantworte ihr alles und als ich aus dem Fenster schaue, sehe ich etwas WEISSES das uns verfolgt.

Danke für eure Hilfe. 😊

Ich habe nun ein Netztteil geholt für meinen Fernseher, nun brauche ich einen Aufstecker Adapter. Kann mir jemand was universelles aufsuchen?

So sieht das Endstück aus.

Und So die Dose wo DC-IN steht.

Ich passe nie im Unterricht auf und deswegen hat mir mein Mathelehrer eine Strafarbeit gegeben (1 eine DIN-A4 Seite wie sich ein Musterschüler verhält). Ich habe in der selben Stunde angefangen zu schreiben und war ungefähr bei 80% als er mir sagt, dass ich aufhören soll. Ich habe aufgehört und die Strafarbeit danach fertig geschrieben. Als ich sie in der folgenden Woche abgegeben habe, hat er mir gesagt, dass ich noch eine schreiben muss, weil ich sie im Unterricht geschrieben habe.

Soll ich das machen? Er hat nicht gesagt, dass ich es nicht im Unterricht schreiben darf. Es geht mir langsam hart auf die Eier, dass ich in der Schule verhältnismäßig hart bestraft werde. Es ist auch nicht so als würde meine Teilnahmslosigkeit dazu führen, dass ich schlechte Noten schreibe. Ich schreibe dauernd Einser und Zweier.

Ich bin gerade mit 2 Arbeiten für die Uni beschäftigt und ich habe aktuell eine extreme Schreibblockade

Jemand hat mir erzählt, er kann meistens nicht gut schlafen une dass es grade eine harte zeit mit dem einschlafen ist.

Ich will sagen: Ich hoffe wirklich, dass du bald wieder besser schlafen kannst.

Ist das dann richtig: I really hope you'll sleep better soon

Oder das: I really hope you sleep better soon

Oder ist beiden falsch? Wie kann ich es sonst formulieren ohne dass es zu förmlich klingt?

JOE:

Have you read the newspaper article about Susi Shine? It says she IS EXPLOITING (exploit) Chinese labourers. Actually, that SOUND (sound) terrible.

HEATHER: | AM WORKING (work) on a class project and didn't have time to read go papers. I DOUBT (doubt) that a successful celebrity like her would do anything like that.

JOE: it is true. I PROMISE (promise). After she became famous as a singer started designing clothes and shoes. She IS MAKING (make) money with her fancy dresses and her shoes. And now she even OWN (own) a company that produces her clothes and shoes in China! Three activists investigated labour conditions at this factory that SEEM (seem) to produce shoes under terrible working conditions.

HEATHER: Oh, yes. Sure, I REMEMBER (remember) the news! The three activists ARE WORKING (work) for China Labor Watch, which is based in New York.

They ARE INVESTIGATING (investigate) this factory in China. How could I forget?

JOE:

Exactly, the activists INDENT (intend) to publish a report showing that Susi Shine BELONG (belong) to the group of business people who ARE ACCEPTINV (accept) low pay, massive overtime, crude verbal

abuse and unacceptable misuse of labour in Chinese factories to increase their profit.

Hallihalloo

kann mir jemand erklären, wann man im englisch bei den relativ pronomen auch that brauchen kann und wann nicht?

the people who/that came. (hier geht ja beides oder?)

und bei where kann man nicht mit that ersetzen.

aber kann ich jetzt bei jedem satz wo ich z.b. which schreiben will auch that benutzen oder gibt es ausnahmen?

danke für eure hilfe:)

Will schreiben: Ich weiß und das verstehe ich, aber du hast mir sogar an den Wochenenden das Gefühl gegeben, dass du nicht reden willst.

Wäre das richtig: I know and I understand that but sometimes even on the weekends you gave me the feeling that you didn't really wanna talk.

Ich bin mir unsicher, wo ich das sometimes und das even hinstellen muss, also kann jemand korrigieren bitte.

Frage steht oben.

Ich bräuchte jeweils 4.

danke für eure hilfe :)

Hallo, ich muss eine satirische Meinungsrede zu dem Thema machen, ob Österreich den dritten Weltkrieg starten wird. Bitte helft mir mit ein paar Argumenten dafür/dagegen!!!

Gracias

Heeeey, ich schriebe morgen ein Englischarbeit und wir sollen dann über einen Film einen Essay schreiben, ich habe heute mal geübt über den Film ,,die Eiskönigin" und och wollte mal nachfragen, ob das so okay ist, also ist das gut so?

(Bitte ignoriert einfach Rechtschreibfehler)

THE FROZEN SUMMER

The Film “Frozen” is an animated Disney Film released in 2013. The story revolves around sisters Elsa and Anna and Elsa was born with magical ice powers. She runs away and Anna wants to find her. The film is a very good film for the whole family because it has a lot of emotions and it wouldn’t be boring.

The Film is about two sisters Anna and Elsa and Elsa was born with magical powers, but she cant control them. So she runs away to the mountains to live alone, because she turns Arendell to an very long winter. Anna go together with Olaf the Snowman, Kristoff and his reindeer Sven to bring back the Summer. Bacause of Elsa Annas hair turns white and Sven brings her back to the castel to Prince Hans, because only true love can save her life. Olaf cames and do a fire, but Anna leave the castel to seek Kristoff. At the same Time Hans wanted to kill Elsa,because he want the castle for himself. But then Anna turns Into Ice and Elsa was very sad, so she hugs her sister Anna and then Anna returns to normal and Elsa can Controll her ice Powers.

My favourite Character is Olaf the Snowman. I like him because he’s a bit funny and he tells jokes at a difficult Situation. And I like him because he’s friendly and ready to help.

My favourite Scene is the Scene with Olaf and Anna next to the Fire. The Scene when Olaf was very happy because he saw Kristoff and Sven coming back to the Castle. I like it, because Olaf try to help Anna and he say she has to stay next to the fire to keep warm. And I like it, because Olaf is very happy when he saw Kristoff and Sven come back to the Castle.

My favourite Quote is ‘‘some People are worth melting for‘‘ from Olaf. I like it, because it‘s from Olaf and it shows that you like someone very much, if you would do this for someone. So it shows that you are ready to do something like that for someone.

The first lesson you can learn from the film is, that you shouldn’t trust anyone you’ve only know for one day, because it can be very dangerouse and you really don’t know the person very well. The second lesson is, you don’t have to give up, when you try something. When you really want to do something, then you dont have to give up very early.

The Film Frozen is a very good disney film for everyonen. It is very adenturous and also a bit sad. The film is definitely a film you should watch.

Könnte ich das in der Englischarbeit ungefähr auch so machen?

Ich hoffe jemand kann mir helfen, danke schonmal

:)

Welcher Satz ist richtig:

• So the first thing is to stop and think.
• So the first thing is stopping and thinking.

Dankeschön :)

Ich schreibe morgen in englisch eine Arbeit und in einem Teil dieser Arbeit müssen wir halt so einen Artikel schreiben über eine Art Unfall würde ich es mal nennen ich habe immer Probleme damit eine Spannende Überschrift zu finden oder Wörter die, die Handlung dramatisiren zu finden. Hat jemand Tipps wie ich es möglichst dramatisch machen kann ?

Ich soll für den Philosophie Unterricht einen Aufsatz zu einer Problemfrage schreiben. Da ich mich sehr für griechische Götter und Mythologie interessiere, würde ich gerne darüber schreiben. Mir fällt aber keine gute Frage ein, die man philosophisch/ethisch aufarbeiten kann.

Hat jemand eine Idee?

"Did you ever catch yourself living in the past and losing focus on reality and presence? To some extent, it's totally normal to reflect upon great memories and experiences, but there are also some boundaries: If you are craving about the past rather than enjoying the here and now, this will lead to you always being unhappy with yourself and your surroundings. I am here to tell you that the past is there to remind you of all the great experiences you have had in your life, but you can't stick to them life-long . Even beautiful things have their ends, and you need to realize that. Just because your life goes on or some things have changed in your life, making that experience not relivable, it does not necessarily mean that your life will never be as great as it was. And remember: Maybe you are missing out on great people while crying over your best friend you lost and who was never good for you. All the changes you face are meant to occur. Despite all the shifts, there is someone who will always stay and never betray you: That's you and yourself! So don't stick to the past and other people if there are thousands of miles you need to discover before life really ends for you. Enjoy every minute and be grateful for having food, clean water, nice people, and a comfy place to live in!"

Wie kann ich den Text noch sprachlich verbessern?

Ich schreibe gerade an einem Aufsatz und bin mir unsicher, ob bei dem folgenden Satz ein "towards" am Ende kommt.

"It is a theme he approached with a rather pessimistic attitude."

"It is a theme he approached with a rather pessimistic attitude towards."

Soll übersetzt heißen: Es ist ein Thema, dem er eher pessimistisch gegenüber stand.

Wäre super, wenn ihr mir helfen könntet, danke :)

ich hab im Englischunterricht ein Vortrag gehalten über meinen Alltag und hab halt gesagt das ich gern allein mit mir selber zocke und hab gesagt: „in my free time i like to play with myself“

hallooo

also muss bis dienstag ein aufsatz schreiben über die Endzeit und weiß nicht genau was ich alles reinschreiben soll. also hab reingeschrieben was genau die endzeit ist und wie die situation der menschen ist und noch die sieben posaunen . Sollte ich vielleicht noch auf was bestimmtes Eingehen oder würdet ihr nichts mehr dazu schreiben?

Danke im voraus

Situation:

Eine Frau isst viele Teigfladen und darin ist Fleisch versteckt.

Da kommt der Kommentar! And that is the reason she has the size of a house!

Was heisst das?

Wo ist der Unterschied zwischen:

little - less - the least

few - fewer - the fewest

Stimmt das:

a lot of - more - the most

Warum gehört bei diesen Sätzen einmal less und einmal fewer. Also warum darf man nicht less/fewer vertauschen?

Kids move less and less.

People play fewer and fewer card games.

Lg.

1. P/presentation

2.About the S/series

3.About the C/creators

4.About the P/plot

5.About the C/characters

???

Danke im voraus

Hi, morgen schreibe ich eine Arbeit in Englisch und man muss dort ein Artikel für eine Schulhomepage schreiben. Ich weiß schon dass man mehrere Paragraphe braucht und einleitung Hauptteil usw. Aber wie soll man es beginnen und habt ihr noch zusätzlich e Tipps?

Danke für alle Antworten

Ich weiß es ist spät aber ich schreib in weniger als 7 Stunden eine Klassenarbeit in Englisch.
Wir müssen einen Essay (materialgestützten Aufsatz) schreiben.
Ich weiß, dass man in der Einleitung dem Leser kurz und knapp erzählt worum es geht mit zum Beispiel einer rhetorischen Frage oder einem Witz.

Im Hauptteil schreibe ich dann Argumente, aber Pro oder Contra? Muss ich beide erörtern oder kann ich mich auch nur an eine Seite festhalten oder muss ich auch aus den Quellen Gegenthesen finden?

Der Schluss ist ja auch einfach.

Heyyyy, unsere Deutschlehrerin verlangt von uns, einen Aufsatz mit mindestens vier Seiten zu schreiben. Ich glaube sie hat das eine 'Ausarbeitung' oder so genannt. Naja, jedenfalls bin ich mir wegen dem Thema unsicher. Meine Überlegungen sind:

-Quantenphysik (ist aber sehr aufwendig)

-Schizophrenie (ich weiß nicht, ob es genug Stoff für vier Seiten gibt)

-die Buchreihe 'als Hitler das rosa Kaninchen stahl' (dafür müsste ich aber noch den dritten band lesen)

Was haltet ihr davon? Findet ihr eine der Ideen gut oder habt ihr bessere Vorschläge? Meine Lehrerin sagt zwar, es gibt keine Noten, aber sie schaut es sich gründlich an und macht einen Bewertungsbogen. Das heißt, dass es irgendwie doch quasi Noten gibt. danke schonmal <33

If you ever decide to travel to California, I promise you that you will have the adventure of a lifetime. From the iconic cities to the diverse landscape, everything I have recently witnessed firsthand was incredible.

I set off on my way to California, the Golden State, one week ago. On my last evening here, while enjoying the unique sunset on the deck of my host brother, I want to take the opportunity to report about my memorable experiences here.

My host family resides in San Francisco, consisting of two parents, my pen pal Max, and the little girl Francisca. Except for the strange little girl, the host family was very hospitable and gave me the chance to savor the beauty of California.

 My initial days in the Golden State were spent in San Francisco. My host family had a nice house with a big garden. The first few days we tried to get to know each other, they introduced me to the game of baseball, which proved to be quite enjoyable, and I have settled in very fast. 

On the third day, to bike it up across the bridge. The view was breathtaking, and the bridge was unimaginably long. I think it took us a good 45 minutes just to reach the middle, where we paused to capture the moment with some photos

However, after we finished, it was almost dusk, so we decided to visit the city center of San Francisco. The things I liked the most were these tall buildings and all the lights that came from everywhere, so I highly suggest you visit it in the evening. 

The following day we drove further afield to the Sequoia National Park, renowned due to its impressive giant sequoias, some of which are over 3,000 years old. It was fascinating, and I even saw a baby fox that seemed to  be was very scared of us. There we camped for two nights. Camping with my host family was an amazing experience! Each evening, we gathered around the campfire, sharing songs, stories, and laughter. The serene atmosphere was heightened by the gentle crackling of the flames and the occasional visit from curious animals. It was a truly magical and unforgettable time we spent in those relaxing nature retreats.  I would definitely make it to an obligation to visit this place for touristts.  

Subsequently, we made our way to Los Angeles, the glamorous Hollywood city. My host father was eager to share with me the real-life gaze of the Hollywood lettering, so on our way to there, we stopped at those letters and took a lot of photos. It wasn't any different from the photos I have seen before on the Internet, but it was still a nice experience. Our holiday flat was in the center of downtown, which was a big advantage because we were surrounded by countless sights and attractions. Not even 10 kilometers away was the famous Walk of Fame. It was quite interesting. People of all shapes and sizes were there, but regrettably no celebrities. Despite that, it was very beautiful there, and I enjoyed it. After a while, as we drove back, the family insisted on showing me the other side of California on my final days, while driving through the Skid Row. It was a neighborhood full of poverty and crime, with both drug addicts and dealers. It was wretched and sad to see how even minors have to live under such conditions. The next day we drove back to San Francisco

As I bid farewell to my host family and prepare to depart, I carry with me gratitude and the longing to return to this impressive land of sun, sights, and city streets, where every moment feels like an adventure. Until next time, your Maria!

Wir schreiben in Deutsch gerade einen Aufsatz(unbewertet) in form von einem Argumentativen Text, ob wir für oder gegen das abschaffen von Schulnoten sind. Wir müssen ca 2 Seiten schreiben(digital) und mir gehen nach ca 3/4 einer seite die argumente aus. Mein Standpunkt ist, dass noten bleiben sollten, aber ich brauche auch Argumente für die gegnerische seite.

ich bin offen für hilfe!

Ich muss ein E-Mail an die Wunschschule schreiben und um ein Gesprächstermin bitten mit Grund. Ist das so in Ordnung wie unten geschrieben? Bei Betreff schreibe ich Anfrage Schulwechsel.

Ich bitte um einen Gesprächstermin mit der Schulleitung, um offene Fragen zu klären. Aufgrund von psychischen Gründen meiner Tochter möchten wir einen Wechsel auf Ihre Schule. Ich möchte mich informieren, ob ein Wechsel im laufenden Schuljahr möglich wäre, in eine Halbtagsklasse.

Warum muss man hier „a lot“ verwenden statt „much“?

Ich habe eine Hausaufgabe in der ich eine dialektische Erörterung schreiben muss. Thema steht oben, hat jemand irgendwelche ideen für argumente? Pro und Contra wären gut

Ich wollte erst mal ein Auto verkaufen und der Käufer meinte ich Kauf, das erst nächsten Monat jetzt hat er sich wieder gemeldet und schreibt mir bei WhatsApp:

My friends said that they want to help me get a car, that they will need me again and I might buy it faster

was meint er ? Verstehe es nicht bitte übersetzen

Ich hab ein One-Way Ticket gebucht, aber da ist ein Rückflugdatum mit dabei.

Ich werde natürlich an dem Tag nicht zurück fliegen. Muss ich dann Strafe bezahlen?

Cancellation available before flight and airline penalty is 200.00 EUR. Our own administration fee may apply as detailed on our travel terms and conditions.

Change available before flight and airline penalty is 150.00 EUR. You will have to pay any further costs if there is an upgrade or tax adjustment and our own administration fee may apply as detailed on our travel terms and conditions.

Was bedeutet das?

Hallo!

Ich Frage mich ob da ( beim %) ein Komma hin muss:

The extract of the novel " The Giver", written by Lowry, published in 1993 deals with the protagonist Jonas(%) who lives in a small Community(%) which is completly regulated and very restricted.

Vielen Dank

Wir schreiben morgen in Deutsch als Schulaufgabe eine Erörterung. Weiß jemand was Lehrer bei sowas mögen oder hat noch jemand Tipps?

Ich soll halt einen Aufsatz über den Wahrheitsgehalt von Vorurteilen über Migranten und die Migration schreiben. Habe darauf aber wirklich 0 Lust, da ich weiß, dass meine Lehrerin und ich da extrem andere Meinungen vertreten. Ich höre der im Unterricht schon gut zu und arbeite auch ordentlich mit und so (bin die Klassenbeste).

Ich hätte jetzt 3 Möglichkeiten:

1. Nicht schreiben -> Note 6, Durchschnitt versaut

2. Schreiben, aber mit meiner Meinung -> werde vermutlich nicht mehr von ihr gemocht und sie macht mir den Unterricht unnötig schwer (hat sie schon mit einem anderen Schüler gemacht und ich bin echt nicht auf Ärger aus)

3. Schreiben, aber mit ihrer Meinung -> ich hätte mein Gewissen für eine gute Note verkauft.

Wass soll ich tuen, bin echt verzweifelt...

Heyy,

ich muss als Hausaufgabe einen Text schreiben.

*How is your daily life similar to Britain's? What can you do that he can't do?*

Nur ich weiß echt nicht wie ich anfangen soll...

Danke

Z.b.das:Born on June 24, 1987, Lionel Messi is a football star for FC Barcelona and also a

great guy. He's won the FIFA Ballon d'Or multiple times. Off the field, he started the

"Foundation Leo Messi" in 2007. This foundation helps kids with education and

healthcare around the world. Messi donates to causes like cancer research and

has been a UNICEF ambassador since 2010, speaking up for children's rights and

better education

Even though Messi does good things, some say that he doesn't do anything for

society. In my opinion, Messi is not just a football icon; he's like a real-life superhero

using his fame to make the world better.

Kann mir jemand bei der Aufgabe helfen, man muss englische Präpositionen einsetzten, aber ich weiß nicht welche die richtigen sind

1. I think its a good way ______ improving my German
2. Taking part _______ the training was fun
3. Im really excited _______ going to the big stadium
4. Im looking forward _______ hearing from you soon

Bitteeinmal kurz hilfe. Wir haben neulich so einen englsich test wiederbekommen und mir fehlt ein Punkt zu 1. Jedenfalls sollte man bei einer Aufgabe so Sätze mit Aussagen zuordnen und der Satz war ,,I can go along with your argument" und ich hab es mit ,,You can say that again!" Zugeordnet.

Laut Internet heißt you can say that again, dass man mit dem Argument einstimmt so Ich frag mich warum das falsch sein soll. Wär ja irgendwie ärgerlich so wenn ich den Punkt nicht kriege obwohl es richtig wäre, also wäre das nicht eigentlich richtig gewesen?

"A nation which can prefer disgrace to danger is prepared for a master, and deserves one."

Haben die Russen zuwenig acht darauf gegeben wen sie wählten? Droht Trump das gleiche in Amerika zu tun und wird Europa dann fallen?

Heyy Leute wir sollten in English eine Diskussion (Comment ) schreiben meine war nicht so gut was könnte man dort verbessern ich weiß das mit den Zahlen ist schon mal falsch was aber noch Thema ist Future Work.

Welcome to the discussion, over the last two decades the world has changed

dramatically. Not only in the aspect of developing but also in the the future,

today I’m going to show you the positive and negative effects of the future

work. As you know today many people are buying on the Internet not only that

we also let KI Intelligence do some of our work. However many people and

Experts are arguing that this could be a big concern for us and it is indeed. Do

you think our kids will have a different work-life than us? Now let’s consider the

positive aspects, and let the ball rollin.

1. The first positive aspect is that Robots will do our work. They will do our

dangerous work, like working in a very cold environment or like lifting

heavier weights or in Industries where they are doing a lot of work today

but in the future they will do most of the work. And they will work

without taking any breaks so it would be more beneficial for Industries

and big Business owners.

2. For the more we can’t ignore the second big aspect that the future work

gave us Online ordering. That has the benefit we can order almost

everything online which is very beneficial we can look in different stores

around the globe and buy from everywhere. We also have many

discounts and after ordering we can give feedback on the products.

3. The last positive aspect is that today also can work from home. Which

changed our worklife during the Corona Virus. You don’t need to go to

office so then you can also spare your time and you can also work in

global companies from home.

While you have know heard the positive aspects now you will hear about

the negative and bad aspect

1. Starting with the downside the first negative aspect it is that we

will loose our jobs to Robots it is beneficial but it will also cause job

losses and very few jobs that people can do. For example Cashiers

and construction workers to name a few are those who will most

likely loose their jobs to the robots.

2. The second negative argument has to be addressed is, is that

because of work of future many people are now ordering online

this has the bad side, that their will be less social interaction

between people and this will cause a great harm to us and our

Society. There are also many online scams that will and are doing

harm to us and it will cause fraud and theft.

3. Moving to the third point that is concerning us is that many

Companies and Enterprises are allowing and making their workers

work from home, which can effect people in many ways for

example like feelings of Isolation and it can also cause lack of

productivity because you will be working from home and their will

be no social interaction with colleagues and this can be a very

important issue.

As you now have heard of the conclusion of the future work and

the many positive and negative aspects of it. We can say that we

can only hope that it will get better for us because as u now know

we really can’t make a real Summation. Because it can be

beneficial for us and dangerous for us. And Yes the life’s of our

Children will be very different than ours because they haven’t seen

and experienced what we have so they will be very delusional and

cannot really understand our life’s and how we went.

Hey, bin in der 8. klasse und brauche Hilfe in Deutsch. Ich soll die folgende Aufgabe ( nur Nr. 4a!) zu der Kurzgeschichte „der höfliche Junge“ lösen. Könnt ihr mir beim inneren Monolog helfen?
danke im Voraus!

Ich finde Englisch:

Beispiel:

Englisch:

Hey, what's up man . Show up man, you want stress?? I come with my squad.

Deutsch:

Ey diggah vallah ich komme mit cousengs und so, du weißt bescheid

Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing with regard to your job offer which I saw online. In less than a month my school holiday are going to start and I am looking for a program to spend my time and to get new experiences. I have seen your online advertisement and now I have few questions about it.

At first I think volunteer work is very important for us because I think we should do more for each other for free. It is really frightening that some people do not do some jobs without money. I think we will get a better world when we do more volunteer work and help each other. I think when you help other people for free they also would help you back for free when you need help.

As already mentioned I have a thew questions about your volunteer work. You said that your projects lasts only one or two days but I would do longer ones are there any longer projects? Furthermore I would ask for more details about your wide range of projects and locations. Can you give me please some examples of locations? You also write about a break for lunch. I would ask if there is a lunch provided or if I should bring my own lunch? My last questions is about your last point. You said that there are no admin fees but are there any other costs what I should know about?

I would like to thank you in advance for this informations and I would also be very grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Adam

Hey, da Deutsch meine zweite Muttersprache ist (bin 2 Sprachig aufgewachsen), könnte man meinen, dass ich beim Schreiben maximal das Niveau eines deutschen Muttersprachlers erreiche. Jedoch ist mir aufgefallen, dass ich bei Aufsätzen oder Anträgen automatisch komplizierte Satzstrukturen gebrauche (ähnlich wie Behördensprache oder proffesionelle Textanalysen). Meistens erreiche ich somit ein höheres Sprachliches Niveau als meine deutschen Mitschüler.

Ich kanns mir selber nicht erklären warum ich automatisch ,,krampfhafte" Satzstrukturen wie Genitivsätze, Nominalisierung, Nebensatzanreihungen, Behördensprache oder komplexe Umformulierungen schreibe. Weiß es einer von euch?

Hallo ich habe mal eine Frage. Und zwar sollen wir für Musik eine Erörterung zum Thema "Ist die heutige Jugend noch romantisch?" schreiben und ich hab keinen Plan, welche Argumente ich dafür nehmen könnte. Es müssen Pro- und Contra-Argumente sein. Hat jemand von euch Ideen?

Hallo, ich gehe in die 10 Klasse auf ein Gymnasium. Wir müssen seit diesem Jahr in Englisch Aufsätze schreiben, mir liegt Englisch leider gar nicht, und das Problem ist, dass ich in dem letzten Aufsatz eine 5 geschrieben habe. In einer Woche schreibe ich schon die zweite Arbeit und ich brauche unbedingt eine 3 oder 4 damit ich die 5 ausgleiche. Das Thema ist einen Cartoon Analysieren. Wer Tipps hat damit ich mein Ziel erreichen kann bitte schreiben.

LG Luca

2. Harvard University: According to the Harvard University website, the average age of undergraduate students is 21 years old, while the average age of graduate students is 28 years old.

es geht mir um graduate students, sind damit die master Leute gemeint?

Ich besuche zurzeit die Oberstufe und habe äußerst Schwierigkeiten Aufsätze zu verfassen. Ich bin nicht die Einzige in meiner Klasse, denn der Durchschnitt in jeder Deutscharbeit liegt bei circa 4 Punkten.

Das Problem ist nicht der Aufsatz, sondern das Blatt Papier. Man muss gleichzeitig auf die äußere Form, den Inhalt, die Grammatik und während alledem ja keine Themaverfehlung schreiben. In welcher Lebensrealität wird soetwas heutzutage gefordert?? Auf Blatt papier111!!!!

Zum Vergleich, in meinen Portfolios Schnitt ich immer sehr gut ab. Das war aber auch alles digital und ich hatte viel mehr Zeit.

Außerdem schreibe ich auch total gern, nur nicht analog.

Was denkt ihr darüber?

Wir müssen in deutsch eine lineare Erörterung schreiben, zu dem Thema : Markenkleidung- Ein muss? . Ich bin für nein nur mir fallen keine Argumente mehr ein.

HAt jmd. von euch welche?

Danke und schönen Abend noch :)

Hallo. Ich werde eine Facharbeit von 10 Seiten in Geschichte über die Hexenverfolgung und -verbrennung schreiben. Dazu hätte ich mehrere Fragen.

Wie kann man das Thema noch spezifizieren, damit es nicht so grob ist? Es ist ja ein sehr breites Thema.

Kennt ihr vielleicht gute Bücher über dieses Thema, was auch eine Meinung des Autors zu dem Sachverhalt liefert?

Danke im Voraus!

Hallo, ich muss für den Sportunterricht einen Aufsatz schreiben in dem ich in einer Aufgabe Vor- und Nachteile in einen Text verfassen muss. Jetzt habe ich schon ganz viele Vorteile aufgelistet aber noch keinen einzigen Nachteil, fallen euch Nachteile für tanzen im sportunterricht ein?

Liebe Grüße :)

Hi ich soll diesen inneren Monolog in den Ferien schreiben wie geht das? Danke für die antworten. 😊😊😊😊

Schreibt/Sagt man ,,It was a pleasant surprise" wenn man sich sehr freut oder ist es eher dezent (dazu tendiere ich aber bin mir unsicher).

Eine Freundin aus England hat mir ein tolles Geschenk geschickt und ich überlege wie ich mich auf Englisch bedanken könnte :)

Ich schreibe gerade in Deutsch eine Zusammenfassung und dort kommt der begriff Erzählkosmos vor. Was bedeutet es und gibt es dafür synonyme?

"Damn, don't talk about how to become confident if you're pretty. Let's just be honest: Fake it 'til you make it. That's all confidence is about."

People are already failing at finding the correct definition of 'confidence.' Confidence is so much more than faking or a result of a pretty face. Confidence is simply having trust in oneself. It's being aware of one's strengths and weak points. It doesn't mean you are drooling over yourself 24/7 or acting like you are the coolest person on earth. Communicating your weak points, not in a cheesy way, is clearly showing a great sign of confidence. Maintaining faith in yourself and never backing down, whatever someone thinks of you, is confident. I am not here to teach you how to become confident because it's a heavy and long progress expecting ups and downs to achieve. But keep the difference between being pretty, successful, or an excessive show-off far from being confident. You can't even just be born confident; it's a long-term learning process. But if you are attached to it once, you go all ways with it!

Wie kann ich den Text noch sprachlich verbessern?

Guten Abend,

was muss in einem Sechstklässler vorgehen, der aus freien Stücken zuhause eine mehrseitige Kurzgeschichte schreibt, in der er sich über seine Lehrer lustig macht, zusammen mit seinen Freunden über sie "siegt" und die Geschichte damit endet, dass der Konrektor schreiend über ein Feld in den Sonnenuntergang rennt und nie mehr gesehen wird und dass die als böse wahrgenommene Klassenlehrerin nach übersteigert dargestellten Autounfällen (was absurd ist, aber mit zwölf Jahren sieht man das anders^^) ins Gefängnis kommt und öffentlich im Gefängniswagen in Zuchthauskleidung dorthin gebracht wird, worüber alle lachen, die Kinder am lautesten?

Gut kommt im Aufsatz die Polizei weg, ebenso ein real existierender Autohändler, der auf offene Rechnungen der "bösen Lehrerin" verzichtet, der Opa eines der Schüler, ein vermutlich frei erfundener Doktor und ein real existierender Pfarrer, der ankündigt, die Lehrerin im Gefängnis zu besuchen.

Was kann das zu bedeuten haben?

Der Junge wurde von allen Lehrern, die in dem Aufsatz vorkommen, gedemütigt und erniedrigt, zu Unrecht verschiedener Dinge beschuldigt und zugunsten anderer, die bevorzugt wurden, obwohl sie die ganze Klasse quälten (und deren Eltern mit Konrektor und Lehrerin gut bekannt bis befreundet waren), abgewertet wurde. Er begann, kurz nach dem Aufsatz (den er gemeinsam mit einem Freund schrieb) unter Schulangst zu leiden.

Danke & Grüße!

Viele meiner Lehrer sagen, dass ich mehr Bücher lesen soll. Meine Satzstellung soll irgendwie schwer zu lesen seien und die mögen mein Schreibstil nie. Bei der Rechtschreibung habe ich eigentlich keine Probleme, sondern mehr bei Zeichensetzung und Klein- und Großschreibung.
Deshalb lautet jetzt meine Frage warum Bücher lesen solche Probleme lösen würde und wie lange es dauern würde bis man wirkliche Fortschritte sieht?

Außerdem wollte ich noch fragen was einen guten Deutschaufsatz ausmacht. Vorallem beim Argumentieren. Ich versuche immer so richtig viele Fachbegriffe zu benutzen und erhoffe mir dadurch eine bessere Note…

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