Hilfe bei Englisch Kurzreferat über Steve Jobs?
Ich muss ein Kurzreferat über Steve Jobs halten und weiß nicht ob die Grammatik so stimmt
Einmal das was ich auf Deutsch alles herausgefunden habe
Steve Paul Jobs wurde am 24 Februar 1955 in San Francisco, Kalifornia geboren Er wurde von Paul und Clara Jobs adoptiert Die Familie zog nach Los Altos um, wo Steve die Homestead High School besuchte. Auf der High School lernte Steve ,Steven Wozniak kennen Steven Wozniak entwickelte ein gerät mit dem man kostenlos telefonieren konnte 1976 gründeten Jobs und Wozniak zusammen mit Ronald Wayne die Apple Computer Company in Jobs’ Garage in Los Altos Im August 1974 entwarfen steve and Steven den Apple I 1985 wurde Steve Jobs bei Apple gekündigt und gründete daraufhin NeXT Die Technik von NeXT war die Grundlage zur Entwicklung des World Wide Web Außerdem gründete er Pixar ein Filmstudio für per Computer animierte Zeichentrickfilme . Von Pixar stammen z.B die Filme Toy Story und findet nemo 1996 wurde NeXT von Apple aufgekauft und so kehrte Jobs in das Unternehmen zurück* 1997 Steve Jobs wurde wieder Geschäftsführer von Apple mit einem Jahresgehalt von 1 Dollar In dieser Zeit entwickelte er Geräte wie den IPod das IPhone und das IPad* Er starb am 5 Oktober 2011 in Palo Alto Kalifornien
Steve Paul Jobs was born on February 24, 1955 in San Francisco, Kalifornia. He was adopted by Paul and Clara Jobs. The family move to Los Altos, where he visets the Homestead High School. In the High School time he met Steven Wozniak. Steven Wozniak develop the machine with you can phone for free. 1976 Jobs and Wozniak established the Applle Computer Company in Jobs garage in Los Altos. On August 1974 Steve and Steven creat the Apple 1. 1985 Steve Jobs must leave Apple and than he established NeXT. The technology of NeXT was the basis for the evolution of the World Wide Web. Furthermore he established Pixar a film-studio for computer animate animatinfilms. Pixar make films like Toy Story and Findet Nemo. 1996 Apple buy NeXT and so Steve come back to apple. Steve Jobs becomed again manager of Apple with a yearly salary from 1 Dollar. In this time he develop electronic equipment like the IPod , the IPhone and the IPad . Steve Jobs died on Oktober 5, 2011 in Palo Alto ,Kalifornien .
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Du solltest einmal die irregular verbs lernen. Was du produzierst, sind ja fürchterliche Formen!! Und noch ein Rat: Erstell nie zuerst einen deutschen Text. Das Übersetzen geht IMMER in die Hose! Stets gleich mit DEINEM Englisch schreiben, fehlende Wörter dann am Schluss nachschaun und nachtragen!
Steven Paul was born on February 24, 1955 in San Francisco, California, to an unmarried couple, an American girl and a student from Syria. Because they did not feel able to bring up the baby, Steve was adopted by Paul and Clara Jobs. The family lived in the Silicon Valley in the middle of all the elctronics industry. There Steve went to Homestead High School and then also to a college in Oregon, which he broke off after a few months. Back in California he had met Steven Wozniak, who like he himself, was very interested in electronics and computers, and who developed a blue box that allows you to make free phone calls.
In 1976 Jobs, Wozniak and Ron Wayne established the Apple Computer Company in the Jobs garage in Los Altos and created the Apple 1 computer, but it was Apple 2, which was built in the following year, that became the corner stone of the home computer development. In 1984 the Macintosh followed, which was to be Apple’s greatest success on the PC market, and the Apple 2 – line was abandoned.
In an internal power struggle with the board of directors in 1985 Steve Jobs was defeated and was forced to leave Apple. He went and founded another computer company, NeXT. The technology of NeXT became the basis for the evolution of the World Wide Web. Furthermore he bought Pixar, a film-studio for computer animated animation films from George Lucas. Pixar produced films such as "Toy Story" and "Finding Nemo", and when Jobs took Pixar to Wall Street and made it public, this made him a billionaire. Later Pixar was the bought by Walt Disney Company, and Jobs, who was still Pixar’s boss, became one of the directors, and a major share-holder of the Walt Disney Company.
When in 1996 Apple bought NeXT, Steve came back to Apple and again became Apple's boss, its "CEO", which means Chief Executive Officer, at a yearly salary of just 1 Dollar, so they say. As the new CEO of the company, Jobs oversaw the development of electronic equipment such as the iMac, iTunes, iPod, iPhone, and iPad, and this was a turnaround that transformed ailing Apple into one of the most valuable companies in the world. But in 2003 Jobs was diagnosed with cancer , and on Oktober 5, 2011 one of history's great inventors , who has been described as the "Father of the Digital Revolution", died in Palo Alto, California .
Super Antwort von dir! Kann ich gut gebrauchen für mein baldiges Referat!!!
Du musst dich für eine Zeit entscheiden...:))
Dann mach das auch. Du wirst übrigens nicht mehr Antworten bekommen, wenn du deinen Text hier alle zehn Minuten neu einstellst. Außerdem hast du auch beim zweiten Mal nichts verändert, wie ich gesehen haben.
Hoppla, ein "the" steht im vorletzten Absatz an unsinniger Stelle, 2 Wörter vor der Stelle, wo's hinsollte..