Ich muss einen Englischtext zu Ende schreiben (paranoid Park). Kann mir jemand bei der Korrektion helfen?
Hey Englischkönner :-), könnt ihr mir vielleicht helfen ich soll ein Geschichte auf englisch beenden jedoch bin ich nicht sehr gut in englisch und da es darauf auch noch eine note gibt sollte der text relativ korrekt sein ich hoffe ihr könnt mir helfen.
In der Geschichte geht es übrigens über einen jungen der auf eienn Zug springen will jedoch kommt dann die security, der junge schlägt daraufhin dem security ins genick und rennt weg..(ist in ich-Erzähleform vergangenheit)
mein Text: I ran fast as I can. My heart was racing like it never racing. I did not knew where I running, but i ran. In the meantime I have brain storming over all what i have done. And I recognized it was terrible. I do not no what is to do know.Suddenly i have seen Andy a good Friend of me. He stopped me and asked me: ”what is up?” He answered anxious:”please please help me, Andy there happen something terrible”. I was only hoping of help.I was out of breath and he needs only roof over his head. Andy took me into his home. Arrived in Andy’s house I sat me down but I said nothing because I was shocked about my doing. I tough what I could do know what are my options? Andy also don’t know whats to do now he asked only whats happened but he noticed fast his friend have a big problem and did not want to speak. He only made me a bed and ask if I want to sleep here. My only words on this evening was:”Yes Yes thank you.” Than I went to bed. But I could not sleep I had have such a much thoungs. It soon became bright. The next morning started. Andy also waked up and looked at me I knew I dose not look pretty well than he ask me: “Good morning Alex. How are you?” I said him whats happen last night and trembling on my whole body. Moreover I told him what I will do now and explaind him what I thought that night. He understanded I was in big trouble. And he was also a little bit shocked. He supports him by my plan, we was going to police and I said what was happening. Because I was very scarred and very nervously from me own idea, so I have had someboady on my side. But it will be the best to say every thing. As we arrived at the police station I confessed every thing in details. At the moment I hurt the security I did not knew what I had done, I only ran a way.I was so sorry about my hard mistakes I said. The police knew already this criminal case and was surprised that the I hasd such a courage to stand every thing. First he ask me why I do this all. But I already said i did not knew. I first asked whether the security man is still alive. Fortunately the police answered me with ”Yes, but he is in the hospital and had big pain in his neck and had broked his leg, he had have rather a lot of luck.” Firstly Alex was relieved of the survive security man. Despite confession the police took the me to court because I broked much laws, like grievous bodily harm. But before I wanted to visit the unfortunate injured man in the hospital. The police was pretty nice and driven me into the hospital.
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Ja, gerne doch. Es gibt im Internet außer youtube noch einige andere Portale wo nicht nur diese Sprache geübt werden kann. Und wenn Du dann noch z.B. den NL von buisiness-english abonnierst lernst Du so ganz nebenher nicht nur Vokabeln sondern auch was über das aktuelle Leben und Redewendungen.
Nun ja. So ist das mit dem Leben:
Niemand kann einem anderen Lebewesen abnehmen zu lernen.
I bought a beautiful bouquet and apologized my terrible mistake. Now I did not have a bad certain since my escape.
The judge in the court decided I have to do social work in the hospital and at the train station. Because I stand every thing otherwise it could imprisoned in the jail. I was glad because I said the truth but the must important was the man was alive.
Wäre cool wenn mir jemand helfen könnte
Hahahah ich habe genau das (Ende für paranoid park schreiben) auch bis morgen als hausaufgabe auf ^^ dein text ist an sich gut aber du hast ziemlich viele fehler mit der zeit gemacht :/