Englisch text über Beruf als elektriker korriegieren?

In the following I´m going to describe the job as an electrician. For the job as an electrician you need good math skills as well as logical reasoning. Among the tasks belong for example the set of cables, to change switches, to install sockets, to mount lamps, to maintains equipment and find the fault. The aids you have to have for the job are a multimeter, it´s an instrument which measures electrical current as well as a duspol, a folding rule, a screwdriver, protective clothing and a pencil. Dangers are that you can get a electric shock and you can become blind when a spark jump in your eye.

habt ihr noch Verbesserungen für mich bzw was kann ich noch hinzufügen?

Answer 1

[AstridDerPu]

In the following I´m going to describe the job as an electrician. For the job as an electrician you need good math skills as well as logical reasoning (Was soll das heißen?). Among the tasks belong for example the set of cables (Was soll das heißen?), to change switches, to install sockets, to mount lamps, to maintain(---) equipment and find the fault (besser Plural). The aids you have to have for the job are a multimeter, (---) an instrument which measures electrical current as well as a duspol, a folding rule, a screwdriver, protective clothing and a pencil. Dangers are that you can get a electric shock and you can become blind when a spark jump in your eye.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen. Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com, für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu