Hey, ich habe das selbe Problem, mein BMI liegt bei 19 aber ich habe trotzdem einen Bauchumfang von 90 cm. Ich habe dann, per Zufall, erfahren, dass man mit einem Hula hoop gut abnehmen kann. Ich habe 1 mal am Tag gehoopt und so in einer Woche 3 cm Bauchumfang weniger gehabt. Das tolle ist, dass man gleichzeitig lesen, lernen oder fernsehen kann. Du must nicht einmal gross auf deine Nahrung achten

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Summary-Korrektion und Verbesserungvorschläge

Ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit über Summary und bin nicht sehr gut im Texte schreiben in Englisch, daher wollte ich fragen, ob das jemand sich vllt mal durchlesen und korriegieren oder mir Verbesserungsvorschläge geben könnt?:) Zu der Kurzgeschichte: http://www.e-stories.de/view-kurzgeschichten.phtml?844

The story is written by Marion Rauhut and is about a boy called Jason who has to do social work, after six months in youth jail. He see no sense in helping old people till he meet an old wamon at the street. Jason thinks, that nobody will miss him. David had forgot him when Jason had been in youth jail. David persuaded him to the theft and had said, that nobody will catch them, but they had catchen Jason. After he had stayed in jail he promise himself that he never do something like that again, something that bring he in jail. But he don't understand why he has to do social work, after putting him in jail, because he see no reason to help the old people, so he do other tings. His probation warned him, that he must in jail again, when he does not do his work.While Jason stand at the street an old woman standing next to him. She ask him to help her across the street. He take her shopping bags and together they cross the street. He is very proud of himself and he feel being needfull and making someone else happy. They talk a long time and when they reach her home she says, that he is a kind person and thanks him. Jason is very proud and it was not the last time he had helped the old woman. Many visits make them good friends.

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Dafür dass du nicht gut bist im Texte schreiben finde ich dein Text super, es gibt eigentlich nichts zu korrigieren. Du wirst das morgen schaffen.

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