englisch dezen. Prüfung about me and my family

I would like to tell you something about myself and my family. First of all, I will tell you something about me. My name is Leandr and I was born on the 21st of February 2000 in singen. I'm 15 years old. I lived in Newzealand for six years and I've been at the school there till grade 8. Last year we moved to Ss during the summer holidays. With my father, his girlfriend, her daughter, my brother and my sister. It's a small village and i live in a nice house with my family. At the moment I'm still at the Strombergschool n. I want to graduate on this school and then i will make my realschoolgraduation at a vacational school. After that, i don't know what I'm going to do as a job. At home we have 2 Cats since 2 weeks, they are 10 weeks old and means lucy and lili. They looked white, brown and black. My hobbies are dancing, karate, shopping and meeting my friends and do much with my best friend Mevlida, she lives in V. My parents are divorced since one year. My dad had a new girlfriend, her name is Diana. She has a little daughter, her name is Maylin and she's three years old. They lived here too. Now i will speak about my parents. My mother's name is Suzana and she was born on the 29th of September 1976 in art. She's 38 years old and works in a cae from srt to berlin. Her parents, so my grandparents, are from Serbia. My mother can speak Serbian. She has a big brother, his name is Dragan. And she has a little sister too, her name is Michaela. My mother lives in Lrg. Her hobbie is shopping. My father's name is Jens and he was born on the 21st of December 1970 in rt. He's 44 years old and worked as a cook, careshare and tattooer. My dad has an older brother, his name is Uwe. His parents, so my other grandparents live in K, it's near rt. Now i want to tell you something about my siblings. I have a big brother, his name is Luca. He's 16 years old and was born on the 20th of march 1998 in Bn. He goes to a vacational school in Bretten and will make his high school graduation. After that he will make his realschoolgraduation. His hobbies are fitness, going to parties and meeting his friends. He had a bartagame as a pet. Bartagames come exclusively from Australia. There are omnivores. My brother and i are very close. At last i will tell something about my little sister. Her name is Leonie. She's 11 years old and was born on the 27th of March 2003 in Stuttgart. She goes to a comprehensives in eppingen. She's in grade six. Her hobbies are gymnastics, swimming and meeting her friends. That was my family.Englisch dezentrale Prüfung Monolog über mich und meine familie muss ich bald halten. Wollte eure Unterstützung nochmal dass ihr mich verbessert wo es auch nur gehe. hier der Text.

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englisch dezen. Prüfung about me and my family

I would like to tell you something about myself and my family. First of all, I will tell you something about me. My name is Leandr and I was born on the 21st of February 2000 in singen. I'm 15 years old. I lived in Newzealand for six years and I've been at the school there till grade 8. Last year we moved to Ss during the summer holidays. With my father, his girlfriend, her daughter, my brother and my sister. It's a small village and i live in a nice house with my family. At the moment I'm still at the Strombergschool n. I want to graduate on this school and then i will make my realschoolgraduation at a vacational school. After that, i don't know what I'm going to do as a job. At home we have 2 Cats since 2 weeks, they are 10 weeks old and means lucy and lili. They looked white, brown and black. My hobbies are dancing, karate, shopping and meeting my friends and do much with my best friend Mevlida, she lives in V. My parents are divorced since one year. My dad had a new girlfriend, her name is Diana. She has a little daughter, her name is Maylin and she's three years old. They lived here too. Now i will speak about my parents. My mother's name is Suzana and she was born on the 29th of September 1976 in art. She's 38 years old and works in a cae from srt to berlin. Her parents, so my grandparents, are from Serbia. My mother can speak Serbian. She has a big brother, his name is Dragan. And she has a little sister too, her name is Michaela. My mother lives in Lrg. Her hobbie is shopping. My father's name is Jens and he was born on the 21st of December 1970 in rt. He's 44 years old and worked as a cook, careshare and tattooer. My dad has an older brother, his name is Uwe. His parents, so my other grandparents live in K, it's near rt. Now i want to tell you something about my siblings. I have a big brother, his name is Luca. He's 16 years old and was born on the 20th of march 1998 in Bn. He goes to a vacational school in Bretten and will make his high school graduation. After that he will make his realschoolgraduation. His hobbies are fitness, going to parties and meeting his friends. He had a bartagame as a pet. Bartagames come exclusively from Australia. There are omnivores. My brother and i are very close. At last i will tell something about my little sister. Her name is Leonie. She's 11 years old and was born on the 27th of March 2003 in Stuttgart. She goes to a comprehensives in eppingen. She's in grade six. Her hobbies are gymnastics, swimming and meeting her friends. That was my family.Englisch dezentrale Prüfung Monolog über mich und meine familie muss ich bald halten. Wollte eure Unterstützung nochmal dass ihr mich verbessert wo es auch nur gehe. hier der Text.

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Danke ersteinmal, ja das waren orte und die Geschäftsstelle die ich ich nicht nennen wollte, und bartagame= ein tier :) Dankeschön aber ist er jetzt grottenscglecht ? 

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