Sind in diesem Englischen Text noch Fehler?
Hi könnt ihr noch mal schauen ob ihr vielleicht noch fehler in meinem Text findet und mir diese sagen ??

Dear Diary,

Today I was woken up by 7 o´clock. I was sad because I must eat cornflakes like everyday. We visited the Tower of London. It was very Interesting, because I learned a lot about the English History. I saw the Crown Jewels and other beautiful things. In the Tower of London we met Jedward. He made a short commercial. It was very funny all the girls cried and were very happy, I too. I made also a photo with a Beefeater. Then we must go by tube with 57 students and teachers! After that we were in the Baker Street, in Madame Tussaud’s. I saw Sport stars, pop stars, Hollywood stars, Cultural Figures and more. Leonardo Dicaprio looks so great! The “Scream” was really cool and scary. From anywhere came people to scare us! After that we went to the Westminster.Then we went by bus back to our host family. I was very tired, because it was a hard day but a really cool day ,too. Back in my host family I ate French fires and gave my Host family a small present for their hospitality. I had a nice evening. I talked with my host family about the differences between Germany and England. But then I had to pack my suitcase, because tomorrow we went by ferry and bus back to Germany. I’m very unhappy when I think about the long Journey tomorrow. But we have a lot of time for shopping the next day

Danke für jede hilfreiche Antwort...........Marou12 :)

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Sehr schöner Text. Aber 2. Zeile: man schreibt interesting klein

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