Amiigooo
07.06.2011, 16:50
Englisch Grammatik ĂŒberprĂŒfen..

Kann jemand von meinem Text die Grammatik ĂŒberprĂŒfen? WĂ€re sehr nett ;o

Why rests a curse on the family of Stanley? The Great-Grandfather had a deal with Madame Zeroni but he breaked it.

Why is Stanley forced to dig holes?On the one hand he hast to dig holes because he did something wrong and it should help to build the caracter. But on the other hand I think that there’s a treasure in the underground which the boss oft he camp wants to have. Stanley pretend that it’s like in a summer camp but he never was in a camp before. His mum hopes it, too.

What is a boot camp?In a bootcamp are trainers which want to help young, criminal people to a better person. They want to change their life and rear them. They should learn that they shouldn’t make a stand against their parents, their teachers and other people in their life. Yes, of course their are a lot of arguments against the rules and methods from them but the boot camp is mostly the last chance fort he teenagers.

Stanleys caracter changed. He become tougher and it isn’t so hard for him to dig holes.

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von houselover1996
07.06.2011, 17:00

Why is a curse resting on Stanleys family? The Great-Grandfather had deal with Madame Zeroni but he broke it.

Why is Stanley orced to dig holes? On the one hand he had to dig holes because he did something wrong and it should help to build the caracter. But on the other hand I think that there’s a treasure burried in the ground which the boss of the camp wants . Stanley pretends that it’s like in a summer camp but he never was in a camp before. His mum hopes that to

What is a boot camp?In a bootcamp are trainers which want to help young, criminal people to a better person. They want to change their life and rear them. They should learn that they shouldn’t make a stand against their parents, their teachers and other people in their life. Yes, of course their are a lot of arguments against the rules and methods from them but the boot camp is mostly the last chance for the teenagers.

Stanleys caracter changed. He become tougher and it isn’t so hard for him to dig holes.

So wĂŒrde ich das schreiben vllt. hilft dir das (sind nicht soviele verĂ€nderungen drin)

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