Ich versuchs mal.
Dear Sir or Madam:
This is to express my interest to do my work in XXXXX.
You seeking for a XXXXX in XXXXX with ambition and loyality? Trough my functional knowledge in IT and great interest, I would be very lucky to get this chance
If given this opportunity, I feel that I can contribute well based on my previous experiences and interests. Apart from subjects related to XXXXskillsXXXX, i have learnt XXX. I have proficient knowledge XXXXX and . I am also well acquainted with international communication and Team-working. Furthermore, I like developing new ways, in solving problems, very much.
I have also developed a quick grasping ability which help me to adapt to new situations and problems at school. I know very good how to deal with XXXXX and XXXXX. Thus I have developed soft skills such as XXXXX and critical thinking in problem-solving. I am an enthusiastic person and like challenges in constructive projects.
I am a native German speaker but can speak fluent English. I am a person with high motivation and determination. I always seek opportunities to improve myself in all areas. I have also visitedXXXX for a couple of months recently and am fairly familiar with the environment.
Thank you very much for taking the time to consider my application. Eagerly awaiting a positive response.
Das ist nur ganz grob mal n Ausschnitt. Du musst natürlich alles auf dich anpassen. Da wo XXXX stehen kannst du auf jedenfall Bausteine einfügen. Wenn dir etwas davon gefällt bau es in deine Bewerbung ein.
Deine Bewerbung aber musst du dringend überarbeiten. Der Aufbau musst so gestaltet sein:
- Wer bist du
- Was möchtest du
- Welche Erfahrung hast du
- Vlt. Zusatzkenntnisse
- Ein Dankeschön
Wenn gewünscht kann ich dir mal n Bewerbungssschreiben von mir reinstellen, als ich mich auf ne Uni beworben habe.