HALLLUH
Ich schreibe morgen eine Englischarbeit und wir sollen ein Summary schreiben...
Jetzt habe ich schonmal geübt und habe eine Geschichte aus meinen Buch zu einem Summary geformt... könntet ihr es eventuell durchlesen und eure Meinung oder Verbesserungsvorschläge sagen? Würde mir echt helfen. Dankeschön!
The short story alien invader from peter yard is about 2 teenagers, one of them peter, think roy, the other teenager is an alien...Roy walk in the main-street in greensburg and a car driver came from the corner, and roy don't see the car, peter scream and say : watch it! than roy see the car too, and he jump 7 yards, this see peter an he is shocked, because it is 7 yards!!!, than think peter he is an alien, because roy have a long thin face pointed ears and he jump 7 yards. than go roy to a park in sit on a bench, and talk with his radio... peter follow him and see that. that. than came football player and ask roy to a football game, than the radio fall to the ground, and from the radio came green fluid peter is sure and think he don't form this earth, he ran home and nim his coummunicationsterminal and say in the device, that he found a alien,, and than he say too : he is not from earth nor is he one of us, delay the invasion until, i have investigate further.