Hallo an alle! Ich muss eine Geschichte in Englisch weiterführen und ich will sicher gehen, dass ich so wenig Fehler wie möglich habe. Könnt ihr mir helfen? Danke im Voraus.

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Today was my first day of holiday, so I planed going with my daughter to the zoo. She was talking about it since a week and was very excited about it. Regrettably it had been snowing the whole night and this, destroyed literally our plan, which we had worked out some time before this week. My daughter was really cheerless and this was mainly because I have a poor number of holiday days, so she enjoys every minute I’m with her.

As I was consoling her I remembered a book, which I had been reading a while ago. In the book appeared a beautiful forest covered with snow that spread outrageous scents. This animated me to take some food with me and to drive with my daughter to the forest. She was sceptical but I was so enthusiastic being in a forest and smelling all these fragrances from the trees, the snow and the wet soil that I didn’t cared about her.

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