LM219
16.04.2014, 14:00
Englisch Satz verbessern Bitte

Hallo zusammen,

ich bin in Englisch sehr schlecht und muss für die Schule ein Aufsatz schreiben. Kann jemand einen Teil von mir verbessern.

People in developing countries have to survive their live, even the have a job. But some people who live in a rich country like US. have the luck that the state helps people, if the are unemployment.

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von carola1991
16.04.2014, 22:10

People in developing countries have to fight for their life, even if they have a job. But some people who live in a rich country like the US are lucky enough to live in a state, which helps people, if they are unemployed.

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