Hallo, da wir morgen eine Klassenarbeit schreiben, wollte ich fragen ob der Text okay sei. Es geht um einen Tagebuch-Eintrag & ich wollte fragen, ob die Formen richtig sind.
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A diary entry
When Conchita was back from Space Camp, she had to made a talk about Space Camp.
As we came into the class, they were unkind to her and called her stupid names.
At recess she wasn’t go outside.
Maybe some children were jealous, because she was allowed to make a scholarship in Space Camp.
Next day, it was time for Conchita’s talk.
Conchita started to talk and showed us her space suit.
José shouted ‘Boring, boring …’
But most people in the class thought her talk was interesting and they decided to give her a chance.
And Ms Morrison said who thinks her talk is boring, hands up.
José, Pedro and Linda put their hands up. But I don’t put my hands up.
After school Conchita was happy and we were friends again.