hilfxmir
08.11.2020, 12:17
Wie findet ihr mein Gedicht?

My Wife - a poem by A. Lushaku

I look at the sky, 

walking along the lonely dark road;

it makes me cry;

I nearly explode.

 

I married you to get through everything together.

We decided to create a family,

now you are gone forever.

But you gave me a piece of you.

The only light in my life.

How am I supposed 

to control myself when I see your 

reflection in her eyes? 

The road is lonely and dark without you 

now you're my angel and she's my sunshine 

and here and now I promise you,

I'll be the best father.

P.s. It's based on a true story...

Ich würde mal gerne wissen was ihr so reininterpretiert!

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Antwort
von Shenzishome
08.11.2020, 12:20

Oh mein Gott das ist mega traurig :(

aber schön geschrieben...und traurig

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