Songtext Meinung?

Ich habe mich mal hingesetzt und nen Songtext geschrieben weil meine Schreibblockade endlich weg war. Meine Frage: Was denkt ihr dazu?

This emptiness

I`m writing this song without any energy.

All I can feel is this terrible emptiness.

Just this emptiness. Tell me...

Why ist that so?

What did you do to me?

Make it stop!

Because I don't want that anymore.

I want to live again.

I want to have fun again

and I want to feel again. I just want to be me again.

Because I want to be free!

I want to feel this infinity!

As all my strength returns to me.

This boundless joy of life.

All this and more.

I feel whacked and k.o..

Like a zombie.

I look pale and disheveled

and whenever I look in the mirror

I see another person,

but that don't interest me.

All I want is that I'm back,

so make it stop!

Because I don't want that anymore.

I want to live again.

I want to have fun again

and I want to feel again.

I just want to be me again.

Because I want to be free!

I want to feel this infinity!

As all my strength returns to me.

This boundless joy of life.

All this and more.

So go ahead, do something about it,

because this emptiness destroys from the inside.

I'm begging you. I implore you from all my heart....

Do something about it.

Because I want to be free!

I want to feel this infinity!

As all my strength returns to me.

This boundless joy of life.

All this and more.

Einen riesen Dank an diejenigen die bis hierhin gelesen haben^^. Ich freue mich auf ernstgemeinte Feedback:)

LG Sophie^^

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Hey,Ich hatte ebend eine Frage gestellt die aber leider gelöscht würde jedoch könnte ich noch sehen das du Songs schreibst und dieser Song finde ich sehr toll geschrieben. 

Ich wollte fragen hast du irgendwie Instagram oder so wo wir uns darüber unterhalten könnten?

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