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The cartoon is drawing by a cartoonist named Mueller and published in Bath. The cartoonist is signed the picture at the bottom right. The cartoon is showing a woman holding a phone to her ear. The woman is wearing a long-sleeved top, has black hair and is also wearing glasses. On the right side, one can see a fridge and on the left side a shelf in the background. The foreground is showing an table, with an opened laptop and a cup of tea. The colors of the cartoon are black and white. In the picture below on the left is a following sentence, "A bunch of friends come. over to stare at their phones."

 The following analysis will illustrate that it is about a new generation communication disorder.

 The woman in the cartoon is on the phone and says "A bunch of friends are coming over to stare at their phones." The artist could mean that phones are not good for people, due to lack of communication in society. He could also mean that smartphones or electronic devices in general distract us too much and that they are already part of our body when we humans, can't even put them down for a moment.

 All in all, I think the cartoon is true, because people only use their electronic devices for communication