Hostfamily Brief?

Ich habe mich für ein Auslandjahr beworben und muss jetzt einen Brief an meine Gastfamilie schrieben, die ich aber noch nicht kenne. Wie findet ihr diesen Brief? habt ihr noch verbesserungs Vorschläge? Der Brief ist nicht ganz drauf, weil er zu lang ist. Ich schreibe ihn hier drunter als Kommentar zu ende. Danke schonmal im vorraus :)

Dear Host Family,

First of all I want to thank you for reading my letter and spending time on getting to know me better. I’m so glad that you’re giving me the chance to know how an American family lives, to live the life of an American teenager and to improve my English. In this letter I'll tell you something about me, my hobbies, my family, my school and my hopes for the year in the USA.

I’m a x-year old x girl and I live on a little island in the x. I will finish the 10th grade of grammar school in June 2014. I like to meet new people and I’m a very open minded, candid, outgoing, honest, confident and fun-loving person. One think you have to know about me is that I throw everything and I’m very scatterbrained. ;-)

I like to do activities in the water like swimming, kite-boarding and boat-driving. Also I play soccer and tennis. I look forward to do many sports activities at my High School in America e.g. Cheerleading and Volleyball.

My parents are divorced since I’m 6 years old and my father lives about 200 km (124,27 miles) away from me. I live in a house with my mother x, my step father x, but everybody call him ‘x’, my brother x and our dog x. My mom and my step father have a restaurant and they really love the work there.

I traveled a lot and so I was with my in the Dominican Republic, in Berlin and on time we were in Florida. Florida was one of my best vacations and there I got the wish to become an exchange student, because I saw the yellow school busses, the big High Schools and I love the American landscape. Also I was with my school for 1 week in England in a host family and with the church community and some other teenagers I was for 2 weeks in Croatia. It was a very funny time and I make there new friends.

My school starts at 7:45 a.m. and ends at 1:05 p.m. I have two big breaks (20 min) and between every lesson I have 5 min breaks. My favorite subjects are Math, Sport, English and Biology. The subjects I don’t like that much are Politic and French. After school my mother had cook lunch and we eat all together. Then I do my homework. In my free time I go kite-boarding or do something with my friends. We went together to the harbor, go swimming or eat an ice cream. On Wednesday afternoon I have Art Class an on Thursday I have to go to soccer workout.

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I hope that I improve my English in America. I want to know if it’s true that I think and dream in English after my year. I want to go on vacation with my host family (you). Do funny thinks and have a lot of fun. Celebrate my birthday, Christmas, Halloween, Thanksgiving and other family celebrations. I want to go on a big High School with over 1.000 students, because on my school are only 48 students and that is not so much. I want to have a locker as in any High School Movie and have got only 5 min to run from one classroom to the next classroom. I want to do many sports activities and make there new friends.

You can see, there are many reasons why I would like to spend one year in the USA. I’m fascinated of the ‘American way of life’ and I hope to experience it by myself. I know it will not be the same life as I’m living now, but that makes me so curious. I hope that you choose me and I’m looking forward to hearing from you and I will do my best to become my year in the USA good for you and me.

Warm Regards,

x

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okay, ich glaube ich werde ihn einfach so küssen :) aber finden Jungs es nicht doof wenn man den ersten Schritt macht? :o

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