Hallo ich hatte als Hausaufgabe auf eine Summary über die Aborigines zu schreiben und wollte mal fragen ob die so korrekt wäre:

This is a summary about the history of the Aborigines in Australia. Before 1788 the Europeans arrive in Australia the Aborigines live very happy in family groups as hunters, fishermen and gathers. But the Europeans brought new illnesses and shot many Aborigines because they wanted the land where the Aborigines live for their farms. Thats only two reasons for the death of many Aborigines. After 1788 they must live in special areas and half cast children were given to white people to grow up on the ´white´ way. Today Aborigines often discriminated and the Australian Gonverment trying to make the life for Aborigines better.

Wäre echt toll wenn ihr mir sagen könntet ob das so korrekt ist, da ich mir sehr unsicher bin.

LG