habt ihr vielleicht ein paar Verbesserungsvorschläge, sodass der Text sich allg. "eleganter" liest?

Dear minister of Mass Media,

My name is Richard Meier and I come from Germany. I heard that you want to eliminate the radio shows. But you can´t abolish the radio shows because there are a lot of positiv things for a radio. A lot of people need the radio every day. At Work, in a car, often people listen to music in the morning. And in the morning you often can listen to morning shows and the news. I think it´s very important, every morning you know the current events and you are informed about things which you have to know. You drive away with your car and you know all traffic reports in your country. I think it´s important to know. And there are people all over the world, especially in developing countries who need the radio because that is the only medium which poor people have. They earn not enough money for a medium like TV or Internet, often they haven´t electricity.Sometimes it´s the only way for such people to inform about the world events.

You can´t take people the only chance of education away who haven´t an other way to do it.