Englisch text. Sind da grammatikalische Fehler bei? WICHTIG :(

Ich muss morgen bei einer Prüfung vorsprechen und diesen Text auswendig lernen..sind da irgendwelche Fehler dabei?

This 2 minute talk is about how i imagine my future. First of all i would like to mention that i did a work experience in the ** musuem as a art promotioner to create a better picture ( ich wollte damit sagen erst einmal möchte ich erwähnen das ich mein Praktikum im ** museum absolviert habe und ein besseres bild zu schaffen.) It always has been my dream to turn my hobby into a profession. I think that you can move more things when you found a passion that you can turn into a job. I love working and giving my best. I also enjoy learning new things. So it has always been important for me to get a vavied job in my future. There are two options for me while I'm doing my own business. The first option : I set up my own publushing company , looking for authors that write books and can change a whole life with their words and storys. I want to find inspiring people. Some people think that a story behind a book on a paper can't chance a life or thoughts about life - but it can! The best examples are Shakespeare , Jane Austen and Fitzgerald and all the other important and famous authors. I want to move something while i find storys. So I want to study literature. The second option : Maybe i want to study art history. This is the most interesting thing in the world. In my freetime I occupy myself with art history and read about it. I love to study (analysieren ?) culptures and painting such as abstract painting. So maybe i wannt to open my own art gallery or work in a museuem to plan exhibitions. But the most exciting job in the world of art is the job as an art historian. I think that being the owner of a publushing company or being an art historian would be perfect and right for me!

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"It always has been my dream to turn my hobby into a profession." It has always been my dream to turn my hobby into a profession.

"I think that you can move more things when you found a passion that you can turn into a job." I think that you can move more things when you find a passion that you can turn into a job.

"I set up my own publushing company looking for authors that write books and can change a whole life with their words and storys" I set up my own publishing company looking for authors who write books and can change a whole life with their words and stories

"So maybe i wannt to open my own art gallery or work in a museuem to plan exhibitions." So maybe i want to open my own art gallery or work in a museum to plan exhibitions.

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Also ich habe 23 Jahre. Gibt es irgendwie Einrichtungen die sich mit Trainee befassen aber kein Studium benötigt? Ich habe einige gefunden die allerdings alle eine Studienbescheinigung benötigen. Da ich mich ja aber komplett neu orientieren will, sollte es nicht unbedingt etwas mit Technik zu tun haben das hatte ich jetzt lange genug bin ausgebildeter Elektrotechniker.

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