Hey,

Ich habe einen Songtext geschrieben und ich wollte einfach mal fragen was ihr davon haltet.

(Gerapt)

I wake up (hold up) I get to the mirror my eyes black (huh), it’s crazy I look like a killer

But I talked to god he said I’d look normal, don’t know what to say, but it won’t be formal

When you look in my eye, ayo don’t deny

Am I the only person to see this shit, I look like a madman, though I’m not gonna quit

(Gesungen)

I have bad blood going through my veins

I follow a bad god, it makes me insane

I love all the things that makes me hurt

Don't know how to say I miss the word

Lost my hope and try to die

Believe me I not a good guy

(Gerapt)

Right (yeah) I can be aggressive so you think I’m expressive

Maybe I just do not know I’m not good with words, not a pro

But don’t call me a fool it’s just a simple rule, don’t make this mistake

Or I’ll smack your head till the jaw will break

How’s that? (damn) It’s kinda perplex I look in the crowd who is the next

Man, I got a name just use it, offences are things I cannot admit

Not with a deeper sense, but just stay there, don’t cross this fence

You say I act like a fool (fool) or my style (what) is not that cool

Yeah some say I’m a lazy rat but I’m being myself I don’t care about that

Just turn around and talk to the paw was that too mean? Have I gone too far?

(Gesungen)

I have bad blood going through my veins

I follow a bad god, it makes me insane

I love all the things that makes me hurt

Don't know how to say I miss the word

Lost my hope and try to die

Believe me I not a good guy

(Gerapt)

Just go the fuck out of my head I can’t stand this can I go to bed

Can I escape this world? Can I change this world?

There’s this voice (hey) calling for me, please tell me (no) am I finally free?

Just look at me as a person, not as a judge! Hostile faces watching me, it gets too much

There’s this cage (god) surrounding me the doors locked can I get the key?

Someone said (hmm) life is so beautiful because it has a meaning

Maybe you can only find it if you face your feelings

Since I was six these emotions are hunting me down

It’s like pointing a gun at my head and pushing me into the ground

You say life’s a journey sometime it will turn

Okay cool but “how long to travel?” is still to learn

Außerdem bin ich etwas stuck..Ich möcht den Text auf ein Beat rappen/singen und ich weiß nicht wie und was ich betonen soll und was für einen Beat ich nehmen soll.

Danke! LG