Ist mein English Aufsatz richtig?
Last week I went with my family to New York. We took a plane what took 10 hour fly from Vienna to New York. When we arrived there we went at first to Time Square to visit Broadway. We saw Shakespeare's play what was the best play we ever saw. After that we went to Manhattan to book a hotel there and when we finished with that we went to the Central Park. We saw there a lot of Artist Man and when it was night we turned back to our hotel and at the next day we went at home in Austria.
Englisch,
Aufsatz,
Grammatik,
Korrektur,
Rechtschreibung