Hi, so würde ich es schreiben:
One of the main goals of government should be increasing investment in public transport “
I support/stand by the viewpoint, that the investment in public transport should be increased. In the following essay I would share my arguments for this development.
First of all the developed public transport system would decrease the amount of vehicles. Therefore people would have cleaner air, less pollution and it would be less noisy. Those changes would cause a considerable improvement in the health of many people.
Secondly , instead of garages there could be built more recreational facilities for local people. The parks and playgrounds influence people’s mood positively and it is proven that they can (die Änderungen ist eigentlich nicht so wichtig, wirkt nur meiner Meinung nach besser) reduce criminality (oder the criminality rate).
Nevertheless using public transport also has financial advantages for the government. By buying tickets people support the local councils extremely. Moreover thanks to the new public means more workplaces could be created , which would provide numerous job opportunities.
To sum everything up I advocate this idea, because its impacts would be beneficial for the whole society.
Der Rest ist recht gut, ich hoffe das hilft. :D