Wie würdet ihr das am besten formulieren?

Hey Leute,

wie würdest ihr es formulieren wenn man sagen will: Ich bringe die geforderten Fähigkeiten mit und möchte mich damit nun in ihr Team einbringen.

Meine erster Versuch ist: I fullfil the required skills and now want to contribute (with them) to your team.

Ist das so gut genug? Mein Gefühl sagt mir immer wieder beim Durchlesen, dass das suboptimal formuliert ist. Hat jemand Gegenvorschläge?

4 Antworten

harrypotterf624

20.11.2021, 17:33

Heyy! Ich würde es an deiner Stelle so schreiben:

I have the required skills and would like to be part of your team.

Oubyi, UserMod Light

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Schule

20.11.2021, 17:29

Vielleicht einfacher mit ...wich...?

Bin da aber nicht so fit. Die Experten hier helfen sicher auch bald weiter.

BisslMehrBidde

20.11.2021, 17:29

ich persönlich würde anstelle von ,,and now" lieber ,,and I" schreiben, aber sonst finde ich es klingt gut

THX132

20.11.2021, 17:54

Vorschlag: (etwas uminterpretiert, um für eine mögliche Bewerbung elaborierter zu klingen)(Habe ein paar / hinzugefügt, damit du dir aussuchen kannst, was dir vlt. besser gefällt)

I possess the required/necessary skills/skill set for this Task/Job and would like to join/assist/participate(in) your Team.

Hi :)

Ich schreibe in 2 Tagen Englisch-SA.

Jetzt hat mich aber eine Sache verwirrt:

Warum benutzt man dann und dann das Gerund und dann und dann den Infinitiv?

Beispiel:

Infinitiv: to go

Gerund: going

Ein Beispielsatz:

The staff want you (talk) to them and (say) so if you would like them (repeat) things or (explain) anything you don't understand.

Ein Beispielsatz:

(Look) at Hobbamock's Homesite won't take as long as (see) everything at thePilgrim Village.

Kann mir jemand das Thema etwas genauer erklären?

Das wäre wirklich sehr nett.

Danke

[KEINE HAUSAUFGABE!!!]

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describe a cartoon?

Hey Leute, meine Aufgabestellung lautet: describe the picture and discuss the truth about this stereotype in a text of min. 100 words on your own.

Habe ich es richtig beschrieben? Habt ihr Änderungs-Verbesserungvorschläge?

On this cartoon we can see two situations: on the first one we see a man drowning and another man walking his dog on the path walk. The drowning man is asking for help but the man with the dog doesn't even bother to look at him. On the second one we have the same situation, but, this time, the man with the dog actually helps the other man. The difference is that this time, the drowning man is polite when he asks for help and that made all the difference. Instead of just shouting for help, he said: "Excuse me, Sir. I'm terribly sorry to bother you, but I wonder if you would mind helping me a moment, as long as it's no trouble, of course.". This cartoon portrays the British's politenes. Of course that in real life no one would be so polite when drowning; we would just shout "help" like the man in the first situation. But, we have to face it: British are more polite than everybody else. I'm not saying that the ones who aren't British are inferior or less educated, but it's true that they often forget words like "please" and "thank you". On this cartoon being polite makes the difference between life and death. It may be a little extreme, but who knows if it may or may not come true. So, if you happen to have a son, a daughter, a student who misbehaves and has lack of politeness, or if you just want them to be even more polite or educated than what you taught them to br, send them to England. Undoubtedly, they would thank you. At least, I know I would.

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ENGLISCH TEXT SCHREIBEN ;)

Ich hab ein Problem, ich muss ein Text zum Thema work experience ( Berufserfahrungen- Praktikum) mit pro und contra argumenten schreiben. Den Anfang habe ich dank gutefrage.net bereits fehlerfrei formulieren können :) Jetzt hab ich noch einige Argumente die ich mit möglichst abwechslungsreichen Satzanfängen mit in den Text einbringen möchte :) Könnt ihr mir dabei helfen weitere Sätze zu formulieren? wäre sehr lieb, danke schonmal im Vorraus.

Textanfang: From my point of view work experience is good for life because you can get first impressions of what a job is like. In my opinion you learn something important for future. Moreover many Teenagers don't know what they want to do later and a work experience can help them.

Weitere Argumente die ich einbringen möchte: 1. a work experience is good for your letter of application, because you can say that you have done a work expression 2. learn to be independent (3. practical experience) 4. learn to work in a team

Das wäre mein schluss: My tip, first you should go to a career-advice-centre, where you can get a lot of information about different jobs. And then you should do a placement in a job you have choosen.

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Bewerbungsschreiben Englisch Schule

hier ist mein covering letter könnten sie mal einen blick drauf werfen und Verbesserungsvorschläge und Fehler korrigieren

                                meine Adresse

Adresse Bewebung

Application for a position as au pair Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for a position as au pair, as advertised on your website.Please find attached a copy of my CV. Why am I applying for an job as au pair in England? I am currently in year 9.Next autumn there is an oppurtunity from my school of going abroad for 1 year and I dont want to miss that chance so i want to improve my language further and gaining during that time practical experience.My 5-years-old brother has given me experience of dealing with childrens(childcare).I consider myself a suitable candidate for this position because I am an enthusiastic worker and I am able to manage organizational tasks independently.I expect that u want me to do tasks like washing the dishes, cleaning the house, cooking for the childrens,get the children ready for school and bring them to bed which also includes my responsibilities. There is one downside in your advert ,the driving licence.I dont have a driving licence because I am allowed to drive independently as recently I am 18 years-old.But to get along with that i can take the public transportation

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss the job vacancy with you at an interview. I can be contacted by E-mail (see details at the top of the letter).

Yours sincerely

Enclosed: CV

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englisch- two minute talk- my personal road ahead

Hallo meine Lieben! Ich muss am Mittwoch eine mündliche prüfung über das thema zukunft wie auch bewerbung machen. nun muss ich einen two minute talk über das thema my road ahead machen und wollte wissen was ihr so von dem haltet und ob ihr verbesserungsvorschläge habt :)

Today I’d like to talk about my road ahead so I will tell you, how I’m looking toward to my future. I’ve chosen this topic because, in my opinion, it’s important to think about this and to get clear what I really want to reach and how I imagine my future. I’d like to divide my talk into 4 parts and now, in my first part I want to take a look at my left school time so I will tell you what I want to reach in the left 3 and a half years of school. In this time, I want to get good marks respectively plenty of points during my A-Level with the aspiration getting a lot of acceptances for study places, what brings me very quickly to my second part, where I want you to tell something about my study period, so for example where I want to live during this time. I’m looking forward studying marketing management as a dual study in Düsseldorf because I’m interested in this field of publicity. I decided to live in Düsseldorf because I love this city and the other reason is that I’m near to my family. Then, with a good friend, I decide to live together in a flat share because it isn’t as much as expensive if you’re living in a big flat alone. After my study time I want to work as a marketing manager what brings me to my third part where I want you to tell something about my work aims and how I imagine my hopefully job. As a marketing manager you have to know how to sell products like shoes, dresses or cars and you have to make these products attractive for the costumers. All in all you can say about this job, that you have to promote for different kinds of products. It is important to mention, that I want to live abroad in big cities, let me give you some examples, like Paris or New York City because I’m in love with them. I expect from the job that it is a diversity and also creative job. And my last point is about my personal aims, so if I want to get a family or for example an animal. And this both questions I can answer with the statement yes, because it is my biggest dream getting a family with an attractive man next to me and two children, equal if this will be boys, girls or both. I also want to get a little teacup pig because they’re very cute. I’d like to finish my presentation by summarizing that I want to be a successful worker and a good mum with a lot of aims and that I want to live abroad. That brings me to the end of my presentation, thanks for listening.

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Ist dieses Personal statement in dem Curriculum Vitae gut? (Lebenslauf)

Hallo, wir schreiben am Donnerstag eine Klassenarbeit über den Lebenslauf. Alles andere ist ja recht easy, nur bei dem Personal statement bin ich mir nicht so sicher. Was könnte ich besser machen?

I love it to meet new people and to work in groups. I am open-minded and I can handle customers well. As I was on holidays in the UK last summer I am sure that I want to work in a british company.

I want to ameliorate my english skills and I think a year abroad is the best way to do that. I also have some history skills because I have an british friend who appeared and explained me a lot of ancient informations.

Danke für die Antworten. :)

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Englisch Essay: Kann jemand bitte darüber schauen, würde mich sehr freuen?

Essay: Pet and Teenagers

Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Having a pet at a early age helps teenagers learn about responsibility and taking care of others. At the same time, it can help them learn to take care of themselves. Some teenagers though, should never have pets of their own if they can’t control themselves and have difficulty with empathy. Therefore: Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Teenagers mature at different rates. Some can handle the responsibility of caring for a pet already and others not. That’s why the age is for the parent to decide. If teenagers are animal-friendly, then cats make excellent pets. They can be playful and entertaining, especially if people adopt a kitten. They are also relatively easy to take care for: good quality food, clean water, a clean litter box, toys and interaction with their owners for affection.

As mentioned, owning a pet helps in the development of a teenager for example learning to take responsibility for another life and experience what it means if someone depends on them. A pet also helps teenagers learning to give attention even if they are not in the mood for it.

Despite of that, how can teenagers even cover the costs of keeping a pet? Well, pets are expensive but if teenagers have a pet, they can buy cheap food or cheap toys, if they want to cover their costs. Teenagers can also spend their pocket money more for their pet or can earn some money in holidays.

To conclude, I would say teenagers should keep a pet, if they are ready to take care of it. If they care for their pet, they return the love. A pet doesn't question what kind of job the kid’s parents have or how much money they make, etc. They would love their owners if they show affection to it.

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Ist diese Englisch Argumentation gut?

Hallo,

ich schreibe bald eine Englisch Klausur, in der wir eine Argumentation schreiben sollen. Deshalb würde ich gerne Tipps hören, wie ich meine Argumentation verbessern könnte. Die Argumentation geht über das Them Hobbys und darüber, ob man welche haben sollte oder nicht.

There are so many Activities you can do in your spare time like football, Volleyball or chess. That is one of the reasons why many students ask themselves wether or not they should get a hobby. Is it really worth it? That’s what today’s argumentation is about. I would first like to look at the reasons why a Hobby is not a good idea.

Firstly one might take the Hobby too serious and stress themselves too much because for example they want to be the best in their team. Secondly a Hobby is really expensive, you have to pay money if you want to be in an official Team and the clothes and equipment are expensive too. If it’s a competitive sport you would also spend a lot on gas when driving to different plays all over the state/maybe even country. And finally, a hobby takes a lot of time. Every hobby takes effort and time so if one is already stressing a lot in school, a hobby might not be the best decision.

But there’s also another way of looking at it. Hobbies help you meet new people and make new friends, mostly in your team. Since a lot of sports are played in a team, a hobby would also strengthen your teamwork and the skill to work with new people. Furthermore if you have a hobby you enjoy, it is also a great way to escape the everyday life and have fun. For example after a hard school day and a lot of homework your hobby could make you relax and make you forget about all the stress you’ve had, it would also give your body diversity of sitting the whole day and straining your brain with school.

After hearing both sides of wether or not you should have hobbies I’ve come to the decision that a hobby is really something that could help you a lot, especially when you’re trying to get out of your everyday life and want to calm yourself down while having a lot of fun.

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Bewerbung in English, Korrektur?

Hi, da mein Business English nicht so gut ist, brauche ich eure Hilfe. Was kann an der Bewerbung verbessert werden.Vielen Dank :

Dear Sir or Madam,

after the pleasant phone call with Mr Mustermann, I would like to take the opportunity to introduce myself to you.

Through my training as a fashion designer and as a clerk for office communication, i bring both the specialist knowledge of garment and management/IT skills. (Advanced IT skills MS Office-package)

During my education as an fashion designer I learned a lot about material construction, processing technique and production from first sketch to a finished garment. I also have 2 years of professional experience as a secretary and have worked with data management systems.

In February 2022 I successfully completed further educaton as a pattermaker in woman ́s garment by ______. So I have the ability to fit a garment, too.

Domestic and International Travel are an enrichment for me. They bring variety and new impulses to my everyday work.

With me, your company will gain an employee who is a team player, flexible, keeps an overview in stressful situations, like to take responsibility and who has a great passion for sport and casual wear.

By being hired in your company, I hope for personal and professional growth, as well as improving my negotiation skills. Furthermore, I am looking forward for to exciting tasks and starting a career in an international team.

Now I would like to introduce myself to you personally and I am also looking forward to a trial workday where I can demonstrate my commitment and competence.

I'm available to start in April.

I am happy to hear from you.

Yours sincerely

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Englisch?

Ich hab diese Mediation geschrieben und wollte fragen, wie ich den verbessern könnte oder ob das so passt:

Hello Stefan,

since you've told me you're looking for a holiday job in London, I've been searching for different work options and came across a quite popular restaurant called "Herman ze German". Firsty, you need to know what the owner's idea of opening this restaurant was and how it came to this restaurant.

As the owners, Falak Shahi and Florian, are of the opinion that German sausages aren't comparable to English ones, their friends have taken the intiative to bring them original sausages made in German. So the couple decided to sell their sausages in local pups so called "sausageweeks". As an upgrade they started to sell their sausages on a music festival which has contributed to high success. In 2010 they opened their first restaurant located in London. Maybe you're wondering why this restaurant did blow up and has attracted so much attention.This is because Germany is very popular in UK and Berlin is seen as a trendy city. But what also plays a big role is German and English people raising awarness of how close we actually are and not as different as they thought to be. Falakshahi and Florian are also playing with cliches and have decorated their restaurants full of cliches. That seems to many clients pretty hilarious and cool. The last thing I want to address is their future objectives. They are dreaming that two or three new restaurants will open within a year and sausages will be offered with their own logo in English grocery stores. I hope this text could inspire you a little on your job search and was interesting to read.

Take care!

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Ist das normal? Hat das einen Namen oder so?

(Englisch weil ich es auf Deutsch nicht richtig erklären kann.)

I don’t like touch. I hate being touched. I tell people that I don’t want them to touch me. I need personal space and I want people to leave me alone. But my love language is physical touch. I want to be touched in a loving way. (Cuddling, kissing, holding hands and other things that couples do). Kann mir das jemand erklären? Ist das normal so?

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Hey könntet ihr mir sagen, ob meine Mediation gut ist oder, ob man etwas verbessern sollte?

The Articel „Tausch dich glücklich“ written by Simon Frost in the year 2013 and in the articel „Repair Cafés: Basteln gegen die Werfwerfgesellschaft written by Haiko Prengel in the Year 2013 explains why many Germans have changed their consumer behaviour.

More and more Germans are using exchange platforms to change their old items with other users. This is because many Germans do not want to throw away their old items such as refrigerators or toasters.

Furthermore, the exchange platforms are interesting for the users because everybody is always curious about what one will get in exchange for one's product. Nevertheless, it should be noted that material things are more valuable to the seller than immaterial things. For this reason, it is always difficult to exchange material things.

Because of this problem, the barter exchanges have created a point system where people get points for certain exchanged things and can redeem these points for vouchers.

One of the most important reasons for trading is that it means that people do not throw away products but recycle them and give them to other people. This contributes to the environment because it reduces waste products and keeps the products in the product cycle.

For this reason, other companies offer donation campaigns to donate to environmental organizations. This change contributes positively to the environment

In the second article more and more Germans are fighting against throwing away products. To this end, people have created several repair cafés where mechanics make old electrical appliances functional again. In this way, they recycle or repair the product and it can be reused.

The important thing is that nothing should be thrown away. With this idea, they want to control consumer behavior by offering consumers in several cities to have small or large defects repaired by mechanics. The problem is that consumers are too quick to throw away products with small defects. Saving money should not play a role, but people should learn to act more sustainably.

In conclusion, it can be said that more and more Germans want to be more environmentally conscious with exchange platforms. Furthermore, repair cafés should lead people to use their products more sustainably and to have them repaired if they are defective. This should reduce the number of disposable products.

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Englisch Hausi Bewerbung

Hallo. Ich muss in englisch eine bewerbung für ein platz als au-pair mädchen schreiben. währe nett wenn ihr rechtschreibfehler, grammattikfehler, verbesserungsforschläge geben könntet.

Personal statement

I love to explore new places, meeting new people and to learn something about other cultures. I never stayed at Australia before, so I wanted to visit it. I think it`s a good way to become a more independent person and to improve my English. It’s also a good chance to learn something about the live in this country, because later you can visit it as an tourist, but you can´t live like an Australian. In my childhood, we heaved some Au- Pairs and so I wanted to test it also.

Qualifications/Skills

Language skills German native speaker, learn English since 2004, some French

Work experience

2009 to 2010 Volunteer work: helping by the child gymnastics

2011 to date Volunteer work: helping by the church for children

2009 to date Regular job: helping children to learn, to make their homework (1-4 hours per week)

2011 to 2012 Regular job: delivering magazines by bike (2 hours per week)

Hobbies and interests

I love doing sport like gymnastics, jogging,… I also like to reed, hear to music and play the guitar. I find it very nice to help other children for example doing with them their homework,…

References

Available on request

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My dream job vortrag. So ok? ilfe.

Hallo liebe community. Ich muss ein refarat halten in englisch über meinen Traumjob und ich wollte fragen ob das oke ist und ob fehler drin sind. Näturlich sollt ihr nicht meine Hausaufgaben machen ich will legendlich etwas hilfe ;) Vlt kann mal jemand mit guten englisch ketnissen drauf schauen und es ein bisschen verbessern :D Oder mir sagen was ich noch dazu schreiben könnte.

My dream job: kindergarten teacher When I grow up I want to be a kindergarten teacher. I want to be a kindergarten teacher because I want to work with children, I am creative and I want to be a member of a team. You need good marks in art, bilogy and music to be a kindergarten teacher. A kindergarten teacher works in a kindergarten. He usually works with young children, and he has to do some office work, too. A kindergarten teacher has to organise things, he should be patient and he should have good manners. In this job you have a five-day-week, you have varied work and it’s well-paid. The apprenticeship takes 2 years. Like every job my dream job also has disadvantages. There are not many jobs available and you can meet difficult parents. All in all I want to work as a kindergarten teacher because there are more advantages than disadbivantages.

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