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Dr Hyde tells the students: 'Karl Marx famously called religion the "opiate of the masses". This statement makes Miles think about the question of a possible afterlife and of where Alaska might be now. After class he goes to McDonald's with Takumi where they admit to one another how much they miss Alaska. Clever as he is, Chip has come up with yet another ingenious plan. He wants to get drunk to find out how drunk Alaska was when she hit the police car. To be able to do so, Chip and Miles steal Mr Starnes's breathalyser, which turns out to be quite difficult. Takumi is annoyed that he is not allowed to take part in this plan. The two boys stay up in their room where chip drinks as much as he can while Miles uses the breathalyser to measure the amount of alcohol in his blood. Miles urges Chip on, saying he can surely outdrink a girl. In the middle of their experiment Mr Starnes knocks on their door. Luckily, they manage to fool him, but Miles has to appear before the jury for smoking in his room. In the end they come to the conclusion that Alaska was definitely too drunk to drive, which possibly helps them overcome their feelings of guilt. Because of their investigations, Miles has neglected his studies, but he doesn't really care. Chip decides that they have to call Jake now, because he is the only one who might help them find out more. They finally let Takumi in on what happened the night Alaska left, whereupon Takumi tells them that they shouldn't have set off the fireworks.
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Das klingt eher nach einer Nacherzählung und nicht nach einer Zusammenfassung. Eine Zusammenfassung muss erheblich kürzer sein, als das Original und beschränkt sich auf die wesentlichen Inhalte.
In einer Zusammenfassung müssen die Ereignisse knapp und sachlich beschrieben werden, nur das Wichtigste gehört dazu, ohne das man jeden Vorgang beschreiben würde. Die Funktion einer Zusammenfassung ist es, den Interessenten bei der Entscheidung zu helfen, ob sie die Informationen, die in einem Text stehen, wirklich brauchen bzw. ob es darum geht, wonach sie gesucht haben.