Schul Uniformen (English Text)
Hi, ich gehe jetzt in die 9te Klasse und habe nächste Woche ne Schularbeit in Englisch. Ich weiß jetzt schon dass wahrscheinlich ein Text über SchulUniformen kommen wird und deshalb habe ich schon mal angefangen zu Üben. Ich habe jetzt einen Text geschrieben und ich bitte euch ihn mir auszubesser, denn ich kenne niemanden der es sonst tun sollte.
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Many People in Austria ask themself, why Austrias schools don't have school uniforms. A lot of British schools have them. There are much pros and cons for these uniforms: On the one hand, you need more than one uniform and they are often very expensive. Much parent can't afford these clothes. Another bad reason to introduce school uniforms is that you can't show your own style. On the other hand you can't be bullied for your no-designer clothings and you mustn't think about to wear in the morning. My opinion about school uniforms is that these clothings are practically. I hate it to think about what to wear for school furthermore I don't care if other students wear designer clothings or not.
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... There are many pros and cons for these uniforms:.... was meinst du mit: on the one hand? ...Many parents can`t afford these clothes.... ....think about what to wear in the morning.... ...I hate thinking about what to wear for school furthermore..... Ich weiß nicht ob das alles ist:)
Seems like you have to write a kind of a pro and con-text :)
Why does Australia not introduce school uniforms?
You need more than one uniform. Normally school uniforms are expensive and not everyone can afford to buy these clothes.
Another con is that you cannot show your own style, e.g. if you like black and the uniform of your school is blue.
But there are also many pros: You cannot be bullied by others for your no-designer clothes or your style. A lot of students in Australia are bullied because of these points, and with school uniforms, their lifes would be much easier.
Another point is that you do not have to think about what to wear so early in the morning. Then you can sleep a little longer without missing your bus or being late. Somebody who sleeps more can concentrate better than others.
Furthermore, nobody knows whether you are rich or poor. You sometimes see this because of his or her clothes. This problem is taken away with uniforms.
So, in my opinion, Australia should introduce school uniforms.
A little tip: "Mustn't" means "darf nicht". What you wanted to say is "needn't" (= "muss nicht").
The strangest thing is that we have just wirtten a class test about this :D (hopefully I will have a good mark :D)