Ist diese englische Bewerbung korrekt?

Ich möchte mich für ein Praktikum in einem englischen Kindergarten bewerben. Ist die so fehlerfrei? Und gibt es Stellen, die ich anders besser ausdrücken könnte?

I would like to apply for a practice in ... Next month I will presumably pass the Abitur at the ...gymnasium in .... Since I am looking forward to work as an Au Pair in Scotland for half a year in 2013, and maybe as a primary school teacher, I would like to gain experience at your kindergarten. My preferred period would be from ..., however I am very flexible. During the last years, I made two practices in a kindergarten in ... and a practice at a meeting point for young people with social problems in .... I have learned English sine 3th grade, furthermore I took part in a bilingual English class since 7th grade. Should you have any questions, please feel free to call me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Danke schonmal :)

3 Antworten

Vom Fragesteller als hilfreich ausgezeichnet

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch

09.05.2012, 12:05

Hallo,

hier meine Korrekturen nach einem ersten, flüchtigen Durchlesen:

I would like to apply for a practical training / an internship in ... - ob die Präposition in hier korrekt ist, hängt davon ab, was folgt.

Next month I will presumably pass my A-levels/Abitur at the ...grammar school - gymnasium = Turnhalle, Fitnessstudio in ....

Since I am looking forward to working as an Au Pair in Scotland for half a year in 2013 kein Komma and maybe as a primary school teacher, I would like to gain experience at your kindergarten.

My preferred period (of time) would be from ..., however I am very flexible. During the last years, I did / served two practical trainings / internships at a kindergarten in ... - ob die Präposition in hier korrekt ist, hängt davon ab, was folgt.

and a practical training / internship at a meeting point for young people with social problems in .... - ob die Präposition in hier korrekt ist, hängt davon ab, was folgt.

I have learned English since 3rd grade**. Furthermore,** I have taken part in a bilingual English class since 7th grade.

Please feel free to call me in case you have any further questions.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Viel Glück und Erfolg für deine Bewerbung!

:-) AstridDerPu

PS: Kostenlose Vorlagen für englische Bewerbungen findest du übrigens hier:

http://www.bradleycvs.co.uk/how-to-write-a-resume/free-cover-letter-samples-and-resume-templates.htm

Tipps und Wendungen zu englischen Bewerbungsschreiben und Lebensläufen findest du in der Schreibschule (oben links) bei ego4u.de.

AstridDerPu

10.05.2012, 22:23

Schön, dass dir meine Antwort gefallen hat und danke für das Sternchen!

:-) AstridDerPu

zwergsaeger

Nutzer, der sehr aktiv auf gutefrage ist

im Thema Englisch

09.05.2012, 11:37

. During the last years, I have made two practices in a kindergarten in ... and a practice at a meeting point for young people with social problems in .... I have learned English since 3rd grade, furthermore I have taken took part in a bilingual English class since 7th grade.

xxGunterAndixx

09.05.2012, 12:00

practice = internship oder practial training oder work experience

Application for a work place in summer 2013

Dear Mr Miller

I am writing to apply for the holiday job that was advertised in the 'Daily News' yesterday for helpers at your holiday camp in Spain thid summer.

When I leave school I would like to find a career working with children I would be available to work for you for the whole german summer holidays (xx.xx. - xx.xx.xxxx). Last year, I was employed in a summer camp in Italy and I really enjoyed it, so I have already some knowledge of the job. Also I have always helped my parents with my two younger sisters having much fun. I learnt from thid about children's behaviour and how to handle then. Having learnt English at school for seven years, I would have no language problems.

I hope very much that you are able to offet mr a holiday job. I would make myself as useful as possible. Thank you for reading this application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Unterschrift (xxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx)

Encl. CV

Danke! :) Die Absätze müsst ihr euch dazu denken, bin mit handy on... Klappt dann nicht... ;(

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Bewerbungsschreiben Pflegepraktikum auf Englisch- HELFT MIR BITTE!

Also, ich bewerbe mich per Internetbewerbung um einen Praktikumsplatz in der Pflege in Großbritannien. Könnt ihr bitte mein Anschreiben durchlesen und mir Fehler oder Verbesserungsvorschläge sagen? Wenn jemand Vorschläge zur Kommasetzung hat, immer her damit ;) !!! Das wäre ganz lieb und würde mir sehr weiterhelfen!! Ich habe folgendes geschrieben:

Dear …, After having studied Medicine at the XXX University of XXX for one semester, I am planning to supplement my studies and gain more experience in the nursing sector. Via Internet I found out about the XXX hospital and its patient-friendly atmosphere which seems very appealing to me. Thus, I am writing in order to apply for a 30-day nursing internship in your hospital from XXX to XXX . I have already gained practical experience in my subject, not only during several first-aid-courses I lately attended, but also during university classes: I study in a reformed degree course, which means that we work directly with patients from the first week on and therefore gain more practical experience than students who study Medicine in a classic program of study. I am a very open-minded and friendly person who likes to help and support other people. Therefore, I would like to get an insight in the daily work of nurses. Of course I am prepared to work hard and constantly give my best. I am very interested in exploring different countries. Thus, I apply for an internship abroad as I know that tolerance and openness are necessary for every prospective doctor. The English language will be no problem for me as I have learned it for more than nine years and even took the English advanced-course in high-school which I completed with constant straight As. Furthermore, I worked on my language skills during a language study travel to London in 2009. Of course I would pay for the internship in case of an acceptance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, XXX

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Letter of Application Übung - Ist es richtig?

Hallo, ich schreibe am Freitag eine Englischarbeit und die kommende Textsorte wird ein Letter of Application sein. Jetzt würde ich gerne wissen, ob ich meinen Übungstext richtig gemacht habe...

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in response of your advertisment I saw in the last issue of „The Times“. I would like to apply for the post of the holiday rep. I am interested in working in Italy.

I believe I have got the qualities for this kind of work because I am very soacial and can handle with members oft he public. I also like to help other people and to listen to their problems.

My qualifications include a DELF B1 certificade, a Cambridge Certificade, a first aid certificade and a dimploma in Tourism. I also own a driving license.

I am available for interview at any time if you request further information. Please do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking for ward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully, [Unterschrift]

Vielen Dank im Vorraus

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bitte hilfe bei bewerbung auf englisch!

ich schreibe bald ne englischarbeit über praktikum, bewerbung schrieben usw.. hab mal ne bewerbung geschrieben, wäre echt nett wenn ihr mir sagen könntet ob ich was falsch geamcht habe..danke schonmal :)))

Application for a work experience placement in summer 2012

Dear Mr ....

I am writing to apply for a work experience placement with your firm next summer. I read your advertisement in the newspaper last week.

Currently I attend the 9th grade of a Gymnasium and when i leave school i plan to study social pedagogy. As you will see from the enclosed CV, i already hab a placement for a work experiece in a kindergarden last summer, so i have some knowlede of educating and helping at problems yet. Besides my side job is babysitting, which goes in this direction, too. This placement would give me the opportunity to extend my knowledge of working with kids. Should you require further information about my qualifications i wouls be pleased to quote references.

I hope very much that you are able to offer me a placement. I would be very motivated to help you and i would do my best to help you. Thank you for reading this application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely .....

Encl. CV

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Bewerbung in English, Korrektur?

Hi, da mein Business English nicht so gut ist, brauche ich eure Hilfe. Was kann an der Bewerbung verbessert werden.Vielen Dank :

Dear Sir or Madam,

after the pleasant phone call with Mr Mustermann, I would like to take the opportunity to introduce myself to you.

Through my training as a fashion designer and as a clerk for office communication, i bring both the specialist knowledge of garment and management/IT skills. (Advanced IT skills MS Office-package)

During my education as an fashion designer I learned a lot about material construction, processing technique and production from first sketch to a finished garment. I also have 2 years of professional experience as a secretary and have worked with data management systems.

In February 2022 I successfully completed further educaton as a pattermaker in woman ́s garment by ______. So I have the ability to fit a garment, too.

Domestic and International Travel are an enrichment for me. They bring variety and new impulses to my everyday work.

With me, your company will gain an employee who is a team player, flexible, keeps an overview in stressful situations, like to take responsibility and who has a great passion for sport and casual wear.

By being hired in your company, I hope for personal and professional growth, as well as improving my negotiation skills. Furthermore, I am looking forward for to exciting tasks and starting a career in an international team.

Now I would like to introduce myself to you personally and I am also looking forward to a trial workday where I can demonstrate my commitment and competence.

I'm available to start in April.

I am happy to hear from you.

Yours sincerely

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Englisch Motivationsschreiben Erasmus+ - Verbesserungsvorschläge

Hallo! wäre nett wenn Ihr meinen Text durchlesen würdet und mir sagen könntet, was ich daran noch besser machen kann. Es handelt sich um ein Motivationsschreiben für ein Erasmus Semester an einer englischen Universität. Das ist ziemlich wichtig für mich und ich möchte ein möglichst gutes Motivationsschreiben abgeben. Danke im Voraus!

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to introduce myself as proper candidate for an Erasmus+ semester abroad (spring term and summer term) at [name of university]. My name is [name] and I am currently studying architecture in my X semester at [name of university] in [country].

As I have always planned to spend a semester abroad I am very happy to use the opportunities given to us by the Erasmus+ programme. I chose [name of university] because I am particularly interested in spending a semester (or two terms) at an English-speaking university. I think this is a unique opportunity to combine my studies with first-hand experience of life in an English-speaking country. As a prospective architect it is very important to work on an international level. Alongside improving my spoken and written English especially in this area, I also hope to gain insight in British culture and history and how architectural issues are seen in this context.

Before I decided to study architecture I passed my A-level at [name of secondary school] with superior success. This included reaching CEFR level B2/C1 in English. Since I attended Tourism School I have always been interested in foreign cultures. I am an open-minded person who likes to make friends with people from all over the world. This is also one of the reasons why I chose [name of university]. Among all partner universities of [home univeristy], [name of university] offers the largest international community. I also look forward to learning from professionals with industry experience as well as working and studying in lively and creative environment at the Faculty of Arts.

Finally, I believe an [name of university] is the excellent place for my Erasmus+ semester. The experience I can get studying in a foreign country would be valuable for both my studies and personal development. So, I am ready and willing to take on new challenges.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours faithfully,

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Nach "looking forwart to" gerund?

Hab ich das richtig verstanden, dass nach "looking forward to" immer Gerund muss und nicht infinitve?

Also "They are looking forward to building the house" Richtig?

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Bitte korrigieren! A letter of applikation

Hallo! Könnt ihr bitte meinen Text korrigieren! Ich habe nämlich Englisch-Schularbeit! Danke schon Im Vorinein

Dear Mr. Hunting! I saw your advisement in the net and I would like to ably for the job. I am a 16-year old Austrian girl and I would love to spend some time in Italy before the school starts in September. I’ve plenty of experience with Kiddies and so to be an opere girl is my dream job. The only thing I would like to ask is if you think you could pay the flight to Italy for me because I haven’t any money. Thank you for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Marta Money

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Wo ist der Grammatik-Fehler (Englisch)?

I am looking forward to seeing the film on friday.

I am looking forward to see the film on friday.

Warum ist der letzte Satz falsch?

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Englisch Bewerbungsschreiben?

Hey Leute, ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit in Englisch und wollte mal wissen was ihr von der Bewerbung haltet, was ich verbessern sollte,usw.

Das ist frei erfunden was die Adressen usw angeht.

                                                       March 5, 2014

Max Muster Musterstraße 44 12345 Musterhausen Tel.: 01234/56789 Email: musterMax@abc.co.uk

Jennifer O`Rourke Automotive Services Ltd 103 Selsdown Drive London E14 9LA UK(United Kingdom)

Dear Ms Jennifer O´Rourke,

Application for a bilingual assistant

I saw your advertisement for a bilingual assistant on the website of www.unitedKINGdom.co.uk and I should like to apply for this position.

From 2004 to 2009 I attended Mustergesamtschule in Musterhausen comparable to comprehensive school, where I obtained my A-Levels. I successfully did a traineeship for a secretary with the company MusterBoat GmbH, which is a small and modern company that produce boats and export them.

Since 2009 I have been working with MusterBoat GmbH as the secretary. During my traineeship with MusterBoat GmbH I gained experience in talking English or German with customers and running a busy office. This traineeship gave me considerable skills which I want to use and improve for the position advertised.

I have a good command of English. I had nearly 8 years of English at school and I have also done a special examination for commercial professions. After completing my traineeship I was able to improve my command of English by speaking directly to the customers. I also have had French for 5 years in school, that gives me the opportunity that I´m able to speak the three languages, needed for the bilingual assistant.

I enclose my CV and certified translations of my certificates. I should be pleased to provide names of the referees if required.

I should be grateful if you would consider my application. I would very much enjoy the challenge of working for a company in London.

Yours sincerely

Max Muster

Enclosures

Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir ein paar konstruktive Antworten liefern.

MfG Cataracs

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klingt das gut au englisch?

Hey My name is Lorena Rae and I am 20 years old. I would like to collaborate with you and help you to promote your to my Instagram followers My audience ist mostly composed of young people in the US whose age ranges from 16- 35 years old. They are interested in Fashion, Beauty and Travelling It would mean a lot to me to be your ambassador I would greatly appreciate your support in order to be able to represent your product adequately. Looking forward to hearing from you

XOXO Lorena Rae

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Heißt es "I am looking forward to hear from you" oder "I am looking forward to hearing from you"?

Hi,

Ich bin gerade im Auslandspraktikum in England und habe eigentlich die zweite Formulierung mit der ing-form gelernt. Allerdings sehe ich jetzt viel auch die erste Form... Was ist also richtig?

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Prefer to ... or Prefer + ing?

Was ist richtig?

I prefer to looking at all of the good

I prefer looking at all of the good

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Motivationsschreiben Auslandssemester

Hallo!

Werkle gerade an meinem Motivationsschreiben für mein Auslandsemsester. Könnt ihr mir vllt. sagen, ob das, was ich bereits habe, so halbwegs in Ordnung ist? Das wäre toll!

LG pechmarie7

*"Dear Sir or Madam!

My name is ..... and I am writing to apply for a place as an ERASMUS exchange student at the University of Aberdeen,which is one of UK's most internationally distinguished universities. The purpose of this letter is to present myself and the reasons why I am applying precisely for this university. Additionally I will explain why I would like to study a semester abroad as well as to provide further background information in support of my application. I am 21 years old and I have been studying English and History to become a teacher for two and half years now. I decided to study English as I have always been fascinated with the language. I first encountered English at the age of ten in grammar school and since then my excitement for this language has increased from day to day. I always knew that working with other people, especially children, was my vocation and therefore I decided to become a teacher in the abovementioned subjects. I think spending abroad makes a teacher much more genuine as far as pronunciation and also cultural competence are concerned. Language and culture are in my opinion always interconnected. To me it is simply not possibly to study a language without being interested in the cultures where this language is spoken. Therefore I really long to spend a semester abroad in Aberdeen. I am applying for the University of Aberdeen only because I think the Aberdeen University offers me to combine my personal aims with my academic improvement. I am fascinated with the geographical distinctiveness and landscape of Scotland as well as with its culture and history. As my second is History and Aberdeen is providing a wide range of history courses I know that this university is the right choice for me as I can integrate these courses into my curriculum perfectly. Furthermore, this would be a great opportunity to improve my pronunciation and speaking skills. I know that I still have deficiencies concerning pronunciation and as I am going to be a teacher I have to acquire this skill in order to teach my pupils pronunciation in an accurate way. In addition, I think through my experiences during my time abroad… I am looking forward to facing the challenges of living in a foreign country and to gaining cross-cultural competence. Staying abroad for a longer period of time will open to you a whole different view on a country and its culture.

I would consider myself as open-minded and extroverted. I am having no difficulties in getting in touch with others and would use this opportunity to extend my social network. You are able to see the world from a different angle if you get to know different cultures and countries and this will offer you new approaches in life. etc. pp "*

Was sagt ihr? Bitte knallhart und ehrlich sein!

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