Englisch Bewerbung für Klassenarbeit bitte korrigieren (Klasse 9)?

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I'm writing to apply for a vacancy(internship, practical training, apprenticeship) as........at your company . I have read your advertisement in the newspaper last week.

I am 16 years old and I have a rather good English level. I am
attending 9th grade of a secondary school now. When I graduate, I want to study......

I work hard, I'm friendly and I learn fast. I have worked in a
sports store(Temporaladverb) so I have both, customer and teamwork experience.

Dear Sir

I'm writing to apply for a work experience placement (ar)    AT your company
next summer. I have read your advertisment in the newspaper last week.

I am 16 years old and I have a good level of English. Currently I
attend the 9th grade of a secondary school and (when I graduate)   AFTER I HAVE GRADUATED  school I
plan to study ...

I work hard, I'm friendly and I learn fast. I have also worked in a
sports shop so I have both customer and teamwork experience.

Yours sincerely