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Hello and welcome to my presentation about Dwayne Johnson! Today you will learn a lot of things about him.
Dwayne is an American actor, producer and semi-retired professional wrestler from WWE. The Rock is considered by many to be the biggest superstar in WWE history. He has appeared in the Guinness Book of World Records (2007), as the actor who has received the highest salary ($ 5 million), in his first film role, in The Mummy Returns.
(PERSONAL LIFE) Johnson married Dany Garcia in 1997, and they got a daughter, Simone Alexandra, in 2001. Years later, they divorced and intended to be Friends. Soon after the divorce, Johnson began dating Laure Hashian, and in September of 2015, they announced that they are expecting their first child. They got married in 2019. He is a good friend of Arnold Schwarzenegger and wrestlers like John Cena or Hulk Hogan.
(EARLY LIFE) Johnson attend Richmond Road Primary School in New Zealand. Later, they moved to Honolulu, where Dwayne studied 10th grade at President William McKinley High School. When he studies 11th grade, they move to Pennsylvania, because her father got a job there. He finally accepted to be in the team of the University of Miami. He was injured, so he left the football, being replaced by the future NFL Warren Sapp. Johnson graduated in 1995 on criminology and physiology.
2012, 2020, 2017, 2016
ACTING CAREER After he retired, he continued acting on television. While he was away of WWE, the company continued selling The Rock merchandising. He started filming in films like “The game plan” or “Get smart”. In 2008, ha was nominated for the Favorite Movie Actor, but he lost out. After that, he appeared in a lot of film: Fast & Furious 5, 6, 7, 8, San Andreas, Jumanji
There is a short video in which Johnson and his football team try to scare the opponents. They do a Samoan dance.
Thank you for listening to my presentation!
1 Antwort
Lass dir eine neue Begrüßung einfallen! 'Hello and welcome' ist etwas zu durchschnittlich, darauf achten Lehrer sehr.
Wechsle das 'in' mit einem ':'
in his first role: the mummy returns
Their daughter, Simone Alexandra, was born in 2001. But sadly, they weren't too happy with each other and decided to get a divorce with the intention to stay friends.
'Dwayne Johnson is a good friend of Arnold Schwarzenegger...' ich finde man sollte hier wieder seinen Namen verwenden.
'Johnson attended Richmond Road Primary School' wahrscheinlich war das ein Schreibfehler aber hier sollte man in Vergangenheit schreiben.
'When he was in 11th grade, they moved to Pennsylvania, because his father got a job there.' paar kleine Fehler.
He started starring in films like “The game plan"
Tut mir leid, falls ich etwas zu pimperlich war, aber ich hoffe, dass dies dir hilft eine gute Note zu bekommen.