Report: Bitte korrigiert es (Englisch)?
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Könnt ihr mir auch am Ende irgendwie helfen, was ich da schreiben kann? Ich bitte euch, ich weiß echt nicht weiter
IntroductionThe following report outlines the house sharing experiences during lockdown preparation. The information is based on a survey done among 20 students how they prepared for the CORONA lockdown.
Survey solutionsAlmost 32 % of the students carried on with their housemates as normal during the pandemic, so there was no change. 27 % stocked up with basics, books, projects to be prepared to stay in more. 23 % made a major overhaul to their living space, they discussed with their housemates. 15 % moved back home or with a friend and the last 3 % of the students evicted and desperate.
Advantages and DisadvantagesSome of these activities has their advantages and disadvantages. Being normal as always, especially in a pandemic, there aren’t really any disadvantages. If people know what to do, as overhauling your living space with your housemates or stocked up with basic projects, you are good prepared. Moving back home or with a friend depends how much space can be offered. S0, if they live in a small apartment, then it could be a problem to sleep noiseless as an example. A much bigger problem would be evicted and desperate: If these students are kicked off and they don’t have anyone to share with them their apartment, then it would be the biggest disadvantage.
BehaviourThe behaviour of the students can be changed or not: The 32 % of the students may forget what happened around the world. The 27 % and 23 % of the students may become more tolerant and understand much better the value of life. The last 3 % may become the victim of depression if they continue on being desperate.
ConclusionTo conclude, if we the world goes to another lockdown, people, who shares a apartment, should prepare ....
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Korrigieren muss man da jetzt nicht unbedingt was. Alles ist gut und verständlich erklärt.
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In Summary, if we the World goes to a Lockdown again, People, who shares a apartment, should prepare to keep their distance from each other and regularly test themselves for the Virus. Their should stay at home more often and air the Apartment regularly. Board games and consoles are good Pastimes with friends and roommates. That keep you from falling into Depression and help you socialize.
