Ist die Zusammenfassung vom Film Billy Elliot gut?
Billy Elliot lives with his father Jackie his older brother Tony and his bemused grandma in the North. His mother has died some years ago. Even if there isn't so much money, Billy should go boxing, as a tradition, because his father has also been a great boxer. Billy isn't really good at boxing and when the girls dance in the same gym, he trys, too. But his father or anybody else doesn't know it and he wants to conceal that from him. Mrs Wilkinson, the ballet mistress, discovers his talent and she assists Billy. When Jackie and Tony Elliot find out that Billy does ballet, there's a big conflict. But Billy fights for his dream and Mrs Wilkinson gives him free tuitions to prepare him for the audition to the Royal Ballet school in London. When his father catches Billy in the act of dancing, Billy dances in great anger, defiance and passion. That convinces Jackie Elliot. He even becomes a strikebreaker to get the money for Billy's plan. Finally he goes with Billy to London for the audition. It takes a lot time before a letter of the Royal Ballet arrives in Durham: Billy is admitted. His father and older brother take him to the bus to London. Several years later Jackie and Tony Elliot go to London to see Billy dancing at his first performance "Schwanensee".
3 Antworten
Das ist für mich auf jeden Fall eine ganz tolle Zusammenfassung. Inhalt, Stil, alles top.
Hat mir glatt Lust drauf gemacht mir den Film (von dem ich begeistert bin) noch einmal anzusehen.
Drei kleine Anmerkungen habe ich, mehr als Empfehlung, ich bin nicht sicher, ob meine Versionen wirklich besser/ richtiger sind:
...even though there is...
...that Billy practises ballet...
...tuition... (ich GLAUBE da gibt es keinen Plural)
ich kann leider Oubyi nicht zustimmen. Inhalt ist ok, Stil nicht gut, aber es sind auch einige gravierende Grammatikfehler drin.
he tries
his father and everybody else don't know about it and he wants to conceal it from them...
discovers his talent and assists him.
Finally he goes to London with Billy for the audition.
It takes a long time before the awaited letter from the Royal Ballet arrives in Durham:
Several years later his father and brother go to....
he tries, too
gives him free lessons to prepare him
Billy dances in anger, defiance and with great passion
It takes a long time
Super Summary, ChaniSunshine!
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Solche Wörter müssen immer ungekürzt geschrieben werden: does not, is not, do not, u. s. w.
(Pass auf bei cannot und can not.)
Danke.:)