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Hallo wir haben als hausaufgabe aufbekommen eine written discussion zu schreiben. Ich hab mal eine geschrieben könntet ihr den mal durchlesen und meine fehler korrigieren oder verbesserungen vorschlagen?

Nowdays, Car accidents are a big issue that we are facing .Every day we hear in the news about a car accident that caused death to a group of people . Most people think that Young People are bad drivers, for this reason people want to ban under 25s from driving after 10Pm. But the question is, would that be a good idea? does it really help?

In the following I'm going to discuss whether baning und 25s from driving after 10 pm is a good idea.

on the one hand, it would have some advanteges, because most car accidents happen at night. That way maybe car accidents would be less than before. Moreover, young people or Even teens are mostly drunk at nights because they go to parties. Also most of them drive even if they are drunk, which can cause a car accident, and the person might lose his life for a Stupid reason .one of the reason why car accidents happen, is that most fof teenagers use their phone while diving. this is a big Problem , becaus While using your phone you can't concentrate on the road which also might Cause a car accident. Further more ,I believe that people under 25 years old are not good drivers. The reason Why I thinke that young people cant drive good, is beacause they aren't resposible and as I Sayed before most of them use their Phone while driving or are drunk While driving. Another point to consider is that they learnt how to drive at a young age, thats why they Still can't drive very well. 

But on the other hand, banning driving for under 25 years olf after 10 pm would cause Some Problem . In the first place , banning driving for young People after 10 pm because some unresponsible young teens caused a car accident is unfair for the responsible drivers. There is also alot of drives who don't use their Phone while driving. Moreover, there are some teens who have to work at night to earn some money. if they are not going to be allowed to drive at night, then most of them can't work because they need to drive to the place they work in.

Another point to consider is that not only peoply under 25 who cause car accidents at night. In fact, there is alot of old people who are unresponsible divers as well.

after looking at both sides, I would Say that it is not a good idea to ban under 25s from driving after 10 pm . I believe that the age doesn't play any role whether a person is a good driver or not .Also old people can cause a car accident. That's why I think that it isn't a good solution for the problem .

Englisch, written discussion
Englisch Written Discusion Verbesserungsvorschläge?

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Boot camps

In America teenagers who can‘t behave are send to boot csmps by there parents.

The teenagers go for 5 months to the boot camp and learn there discipline, the boot camp help them to get back on the right path and straighten up there life. When the teenagers arrive at the boot camp, the drill instructors will teach them the rules, one of this rules is, that you can only answer with sir, yes sir or madam, yes madam.
Some people say that boot camps are a good idea. Is it a good idea to send teenagers who vandalise and can’t behave to send them to a boot camp? There are advantages and disadvantages . The first argument is that boot camps help people to stay out of trouble and help them to get back on the right path and straighten up there life. The second argument is that the teenagers learn to follow the rules, discipline and respect. The third argument is, teenagers don’t go in the prison. On the other hand there are disadvantages. The first argument is, teenagers soon forget about boot camp and get in trouble again. Another argument is boot camps do not solve the problems at home or school, for example the family have money problems or they are bullied at school, because they don’t do anything illegal, such as tailing drugs or dell with drugs. The last argument is that the boot camp can teenagers make Ill and they can get a trauma. After looking at both sides, I think boot camps are not a good idea, because the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

Englisch, written discussion
Englisch Hausaufgabe Written Discussion Verbesserungsvorschläge?

Ich muss als Hausaufgabe eine Written Discussion schreiben. Könnte jemand über meine drüberschauen und sie Verbessern oder mir tipps geben wie ich sie besser machen kann ?

Aufgabenstellung: The Government plans to ration the usage of cars per person per year. Discuss this programme and suggest wyays to cope with car-related pollution.

There are some arguments for and against rationing the usage of cars per person per year.

First, people would have to use busses or trains more ofthen in small cities that would cause full busses and trains, because they do not have enough busses everywhere. People have to find a bus or train that comes to the rigth time to the rigth place.

Second. In Germany, we have to pay for our car taxes every year or we aren't allowed to use it. If we can only use it a bit, it would get much too expensive for that.

Another argument against is, that people who have to earn money by driving cars, will get problems. For example how could a taxi driver earn enough money for food, if he is not allowed to drive a car as ofthen as he wants to?

A good argument for rationing the usage of cars is, it would reduce the bad pollution from the cars, because they aren't used every day.

Another good argument for rationing the usage of cars is, we would have less traffic. That means that the people who are driving at that day can drive faster and there are no traffic jams anymore.

The last argument for is, the rushhour would not cause traffic jams when more people go by bus or train, so everyone comes punktual for work and can sleep longer, because they are faster.

On the one hand busses and trains might be full, but you can also ride your bike, so you will get no problems.

As conclusion I would say, the arguments for rationing the usage of cars are better than the arguments against, but there have to be special laws for people who earn their money by driving, like taxi drivers.

Englisch, Verbesserung, written discussion
Written Discussion "Would you like to live in Mumbai". Könnte mir jmand die Discussion verbessern?

Könntet ihr den Text verbessern ?. Ich shreib morgen ne Arbeit und ich find den nicht so gut und würde mich auf ein Feedback freuen.

**Today I am writing about the question „would you like to live in Mumbai?”. I think it´s a good question, because there a many Arguments for and against.

My first Argument for living in Mumbai is, that if you speak English, you can manage everything in the city. It is not necessary to speak the regional language. For example, …. Second argument is that India is one of few countries, where even people can have a maid or a chauffeur. You are able to afford them. In addition you can send your child to school. Because there are German, American and English schools. Another Argument for is that Mumbai is a city for shopaholics. There are designer closets much cheaper than in Germany. The qualities from the Materials are good. Tough the crime rate is high, so you can robbed in the city. The city has good transport options, for instance local trains, metro, monorail and public transport buses. No other city can sustain this much population and traffic. Nevertheless is there the rush hour. The Streets are crowded and it tooks a long time to come to the destination. My last argument is that the food in Mumbai is very delicious. You can eat in small restaurants, on the street or in very good restaurants to try out different cuisines. However you have to pay attention with food.

To sum up, the people in the city are very friendly and they will help you every time, when you need. I think I would like to live in Mumbai It´s a fascinating city with colorful festivals. **

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