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Hi guys , welcome to my blog !
Today i want to told you about my vacation.
My nice family and me did an awesome ,memorable journey.
We visited the Grand Canyon in Arizona, USA.
We drove through different states and
the drive to there was so long , almost we drove about 3000 miles.
Before we were there, i thought that
it would be boring but when we arrived i saw wonderful multi-colored rocks.
The view of the skywalk was unique . I could feel the freedom and the quiet atmosphere.
One of the best thing in grand canyon is the clean air, so refreshing.
the rangers told us about the interesting history and they protect the rocks so that
nobody damage them but they protect the humans , too because there are wild animals.
we camped two days in little tents and we had to learn how to ride on lazy mules.
we took beautiful family photos and we took photos of the spiritual region.
if you havent been there then you have to change it because
you miss a great adventure , else.
Goodby guys !
i hope you like my blog.
