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Kann mir jemand mir ein tipp geben wo ich ein Beispieltext comment about youth unemployment findet.? Ich weiß nicht wie ich den Text schreiben soll und wo mit ich anfangen muss

Answer 1

[cmacm]

zum beispiel:

Youth unemployment in the United Kingdom is the level of unemployment among young people, typically defined as those aged 18–25. A related concept is graduate unemployment which is the level of unemployment among university graduates. Statistics for June 2010 show that there are 926,000 young people under the age of 25 who are unemployed which equates to an unemployment rate of 19.6% among young people. This is the highest youth unemployment rate in 17 years. In November 2011 youth unemployment hit 1.02 million.The high levels of youth unemployment in the United Kingdom have led some politicians and media commentators to talk of a "lost generation".

There is debate as to the causes of youth unemployment. Some of the causes of youth unemployment in the United Kingdom are not specific to young people.Widely cited causes of youth unemployment in the United Kingdom include :

Financial Crisis: Graduate recruiters have recruited less because of the financial crisis of 2007–2010.

Public sector cuts in spending: The cuts to the public sector (Government jobs) have also affected the chances of young people.

Immigration: Immigration from the European Union has been blamed for reducing the number of seasonal summer jobs available for university students.

Lack of qualifications:there could be a connection between youth unemployment and poor results in GCSE English and Maths.

Lack of experience: Employers are becoming more risk conscious and look to recruit more experienced older staff.

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Answer 2

[AstridDerPu]

Hallo,

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• enotes.com/topics/how-write-argumentative-essay
• writefix.com/?page_id=1524

oder auch useful phrases for a comment (discussion etc.):

• schule-sorglos.de/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/VokabellisteEnglischOberstufe.pdf

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Beispiele zum Thema youth unemployment:

(http://www.telegraph.co.uk/finance/jobs/youth-unemployment-competition/9853455/Max-Kirby-wins-HJI-Reed-youth-unemployment-essay-prize.html; da findest du auch Links zu den nachplatzierten Comments)

:-) AstridDerPu