Frage
Ich würde statt so abgehackte Sätze mehr Links einbauen wie z.B. Moreover, Furthermore. Bsp: More than 600 people built Stonehenge. Furthermore the Druids used it as a suntemple.
Oder bspw.: Around Stonehenge is a high wall WHICH is built of a sandstone circle with 60 stones and a bluestone circle with 66 stones, which are 1m high.
Und statt so einfache Sätze wie der hier: In the middle is the Altarston , which is 3m long. Würde ich sagen: The Altarston of 3m length forms the middle of the Stonehenge. Moreover Stonehenge has a diameter of 110m... usw.