Also ich habe zu einer kurzen Geschichte im Englisch Buch eine Charakterisierung verfasst.
Ich würde von euch gerne ein Feedback haben:
Morgan Vinten called Moon is a 13 years old boy.He is thin and short,has a pale Face and long black Hairs.His Hairs are long and black he has cut them to a Ponytail und colored them blue.He wears a silver ring on his right ear.He is dress like a Rocker and diffrent from the other,he doesnt like to look commercial.His Parents are both Docotors and they want that Moon Stury,but Moon dosnt like school and ignor his homeworks.He is a Drummer in a Band and he thinks he can later make money with his Music.His Favourit Band are the Beatles.
Moon gets fast angry and he hate many things,one of the reason why he plays drumms is,that its a good feeling for him when he sometime hit on something.