englisches Valentinstag-Gedicht

Hi Leute

Von der Schule aus müssen wir ein eigenes Valentinstaggedicht erfinden.. und zwar auf Englisch... Habt ihr irgendwelche Tipps oder gute Reime für mich?

Hier ist mein Gedicht bis jetzt:

And I go crazy cause here isn't where I wanna be....... Right next to you, there is my place where i should stay And we are acting like everything is okay But I wanna hear your voice Like i never had a choice That we will maybe never see us again And I hope we will forget this pain which overcomes us everytime only together we can shine... (?)

Es reimt sich noch nicht alles und irgendwie zu schmalzig ist es auch :D

habt ihr noch gute Reime für mich?$

danke im Vorraus :)

Answer 1

[Jeally]

Am besten ist es immer erst Wörter raus zu suchen, die zu dem Thema passen und dann dazu ein Wort das sich reimt. Dann kann man sätze erfinden.

zum Beispiel: Valentine / time, you /do

also: To ask you to be my Valentine I'd have to talk to you, Something that in all this time I've managed not to do.

I'd have to get past "Hi!" somehow To show you that I care, But the right time is never now, Especially when you're there.

It's as if a wall of fear, Transparent yet profound, Came hurtling up as you come near, Cutting off all sound.

I fear I won't know what to say And strike you as a fool, Or you'll be glad to get away, Polite not to be cruel.

Easier to dream than act, To hope than to find out, So fearful of the force of fact I wait in fear-filled doubt.

But now the day of love has come, And I must cross its line, And so I ask you through this poem To be my Valentine.

Sonst google doch einfach "Love poem" oder "Valentin's Day poem"