Zusammenfassung (summary) zu A Christmas Carol?
Hallo Leute ! Eigentlich bin ich gut in englisch, ich habe oder besser gesagt hatte voll ein Brett vorm Kopf als ich diesen Text (siehe unten) gestern noch spät nachts geschrieben habe und bin mir sicher das da viele grammatikalische (zeit)fehler drin sind. Die Zusammenfassung soll in der Gegenwart geschrieben sein. Könnte jemand sich vlt die Mühe machen und diesen kurzen abschnitt korrigieren falls nötig, danke!: (Vorab entschuldigung wenn keine absätze eingefügt werden, manchmal hackt das Programm!)
~On one Christmas Eve something very special happens to him, something that changes his life forever. At midnigt the ghost of his former buisness-partner Jacob Marley appears to him and tell him, that 3 ghosts will visit him tonight to show him the past christmases the christmas now and the future christmases. First hes very scared and confused about the situation and thinks that its just a dream but as the first ghost appears he realizes that everything is real. The 3 ghosts take him to a journey through his life and show him (...). On this journey he finds himself back to himself so he finally realizes that he must change his lifestyle and personality to be a good person again. He also realizes that money isnt the most important thing in life, that family and friends are worth more and how wonderful a merry christmas actually is. ~
Es wäre sehr nett wenn ich Hilfe bekommen wüde und sich jmd die mühe macht zu korrigieren. Danke!
Dürfte richtig sein. Aber ganz sicherbin ich mir auch nicht gib es nochmal in einen Übersetzer ein.
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Finds himself back to himself klingt komisch aber mir fällt gerade nix besseres ein gg
Wie kann ich "Mr. Mumsford" besser analysieren?
Und zwar schreib ich morgen eine Englisch Klausur. Ich habe als Übung den Text "Mr. Mumsford" analysiert. Ich wollt euch fragen, ob ihr mir dabei helfen könntet, es besser zu machen oder mir sagen, wo ich was falsch gemacht habe. Habe ich zu viel Text wiedergegeben oder gehört das beim Analysieren/Intepretieren dazu?" In the given Text " Mr. Mumsford" are two maincharackters, Bibs and the principal. Bibs is a janitor in the small southern school. He starts his work 27 years ago. On his first day he earned by the principal his nickname "Bibs". He doesn´t like this nickname. In 27 years nobody knows his real name. That makes him depressive. He gives the blames to his principal and hate him for that. Bibs starts to think to kill him on one day. That shows his despair.Late at night he catchs the principal in the school. The principal was very surprised. Bibs tells him, that he comes to kill him. The principal is scared and confused. He trys to settle the conflict friendly. That shows, that he is obliging and goes respecktfull with other opionion. He promise him, that he name him and all the other teacher Mr. Mumsford and not bibs. He shows respect.All in all we can say, that Mr. Mumsford was an very depressive man, because his nickname and, that nobody knows his realname. He was so in depressive, that he think to kill the principal.The principal is an very respectfully man, because he accepted the opinion from the janitor and promised him, that everyone say know Mr Mumsford to him."Das ist meine Analyse, ich hab extra Zeilenangaben ausgelassen. Falls ich Grammatikfehler gemacht habe, könnt ihr es auch benennen.
Danke schonmal im Vorraus dass ihr mir dabei hilft.
Kann ich diese Zusammenfassung zum Buch The bottle Imp so lassen?
Hallo, ich weiß nicht, ob ich diese Zusammenfassung so stehen lassen kann! Es wäre nett, wenn ihr vielleicht mal schauen könntet, ob ich irgendwie Zeitfehler oder ähnliches drin habe .
summaryKeawe an Hawaiian, decided to go to San Francisco. There he noticed one beautiful house and stopped at it .Then the owner of the home came to him. Keawe said to the owner that he would like to have so a house, too. And so the owner meant, that he could have a house for 50 dollars when he bought a bottle with an Imp which fulfilled all his wishes . So Keawe bought this bottle. The owner of this bottle musn´t be in possession of it when he dies or his sole will burn in hell . It must sell cheaper than the owner has paid before. Keawe went to his friend Lopaka, and told him all what had done and everything about the bottle. Then they went together back to Hawaii. Upon arriving home Keawe discovered that his uncle had died and that he had left him a beautiful land at Hookena and exactly enough money to build the home of his dreams. Then Lopaka bought the bottle because keawe didn´t want this bottle anymore. Keawe accepted the good fortune and began living a life of contentment with a house of his dreams . Until he saw a beautiful woman names, Kokua. They wanted to marry. Then the rich Hawaiian went home and saw, that he had Chinese evil. He realized, that he couldn´t marry Kokua in this condition, so he decided that he had to find the magic bottle and must buy it back. Only doing this he become healthy and could marry his love. When he was back in San Francisco a white man had this bottle. But Keawe realized , that the price had dropped dramatically. The owner had paid two cents. Keawe decided that he will marry Kokua and so he bought the bottle for one cent. He wished that he is healthy. Now the Chinese evil was healded, but he always thought at this, that he can´t sell the bottle cheaper an that he must go to hell when he die. Then Keawe married Kokua. He told Kokua all from the beginning and said that he can´t sell the bottle cheaper then one cent. Then Kokua said that they had to go to a country where a penny is not the lowest coin. They went to an Island of France and sold the bottle for four centimes there. Then Kokua bought the bottle from her man with the help of an old man. She told the old man the whole story and that she will buy it back from him after he had bought it. The man bought it for four centime and she bought it for three back. Keawe discovered this and convinces another man to buy it for two centime with the promise, that Keawe will buy it back from him for one centime. The man who shall bought it for Keawe is a greedy and wicked man and as he had the bottle he wouldn´t sell it to Keawe. The wicked man didn´t care that he went to hell, because with this bottle he could wish himself everything he wanted. Now Keawe and Kokua are free and nobody of them must go to hell when he dies.
danke im vorraus lg
Kann mir jemand dieses Summary korrigieren?
The text 'A life in the day' is written by a 27 years-old man who called Skinnyman and lives in north London. It's a interview in which he describe his course of his day. First he tells that he is addicted to cannabis. He provides the dealer, who make money with the addicts. Because the addicts have'nt got money, they were get guns from dealers to get money for the drugs. His lifestyle is'nt normal, because he don't go sleep when it'snormal. It is indifferent when he sleeps and when he wakes up. Also he mentions that he gets a record deal. He loves music and mostly he writes his lyrics in the night, when he has the best ideas. Because of his record deal he has many haters in the ghetto. Most of the people are jealous because thay think that Skinnyman has money, but it isn't the truth. His life is very problematic. He has often problems with the police and other authorities. But it doesn't cares him. He thinks that only his father can tell him what to do, but he left him and his mother early. Also he explains that all his friends went to prison, so he decides to go another way. Nevertheless he have to go to prison for 2 years, but he did 12 months. The reason for that was a conflict with a memeber of London Underground staff. In conclusion he did it and now he wants to held other young kids. So all in all he loves this place, because it's his home. Therefore he doesn't want to leave.
Kann mir wer diese englische Zusammenfassung korrigieren?
`The Absolutely True Diay of a part time Indian´ is the abridged adapted version from the novel by Sherman Alexie and is about an Indian Boy. who is going on a all-white-school In the first paragraph, Arnold is flirting with Penelope. She is telling him her dreams, but Arnold laughing at her. He is asking her, what she really want to do with her life. Then she´s telling him, her real dreams. She´s wanting to be a architect. Arnold doesn´t lauhging at her, because it´s his drem too.
In the second paragraph Arnold and Penelope are going with roger and his friends to a diner. He is ordering many things for Penelope and him. But he is sad, because he haven´t money. He is poor. As Arnold going to the toilett, he tells Roger that he has forget his wallet, but Arnold is lying. Roger is understanding and lending him the money. At the school Penelope telling him, that she´s knwoing that he has lending money from roger. She´s asking him, whether he is poor and he didn´t lying to her. Penelope telling it roger and he helping him in the future. Now Arnold knowing that he doesn´t need to lie.
Danke schonmal im vorraus,
Ps: Die Aufgabe war ein Text zusammenzufassen und das in der Jetzt Form
Charakterisierung Englisch Just Along for a Ride Fehle?!
Wäre lieb, wenn jmnd. drüberschauen könnte und evtl. Fehler findet, Verbesserungsvorschläge...
The story “Just Along for the Ride” by Dennis Kurumada in 1972 is about young boys who dirve in a car and try to flatten a kid. This plan gets out of control and doesn’t turn out well. The main character of the story ”Just Along for a Ride” is a male student, about 16 years old. The protagonist uses everyday language (l.15) He describes himself being “pretty dull” (l.3), because he drives around with his friend who just got his license. In fact he is “cold, damp and bored” (l. 5) what the narrator also tells us directly (the main character is also the narrator. That implies that they aren’t very creative, otherwise he wouldn’t be bored. As the other boys want to flatten a kid he doesn’t agree. On the one hand he has feelings of guilty, he’s a thoughtful person. On the other hand he is scared, which means that he is a careful person and thinks about the consequences. Because of this characteristic he is gibed by his friends. They think that he is a killjoy and not humorous. For example: “You worry too much. Whenever we wanna have some fun, you always chicken out.” (l.15). He isn’t very assertive or strong-minded in the beginning. His friends retune him and oppress him. For instance: “We drive up slow, then swing open the door real fast, and knock the guy on his can,” says Phil (l.10). The protagonist is against it. “You guys are nuts,” he says and “What if they call the cops?” (l.15) Although they still do it. Or in line 34 he wants the driver to stop the car but the driver convinces him that it is necessary to drive on. In the end he feels guilty even if it hasn’t been his idea and he tried to stop the others. That’s why he is really responsible-minded but he also doesn’t want his friends to get in trouble, he’s kind of loyal. He shows his feelings what makes him sensible (l.30). Finally he gets strong-minded and assertive. At night his friends visit him and propose him to forget about the crime. He gets mad and visits the victim, what nobody expects. All in all I think the protagonist is a adorable person. I can identify with the character because it’s realistic how he reacts. Besides I liked it a lot that he did not do what his friends want him to do. He goes his own was and that’s brave. In opposite to the protagonist there’s Phil also a co-driver. He is male, a student and about 16 years old. The first time he says something he cuts off the protagonist (l.8). That’s impolite and not respectful. On top of that he is vicious, careless and sneaky because he has the idea “to drive up to somebody….some kid….and flatten him.”(l.8) He is language is colloquial, e. g. “We wanna have some fun…“ (l.16) and firstly he doesn’t speak fluently (l.8) It seems that he tries to be funny and cool, so the others respect him. In conclusion I think Phil isn’t very authentic and very likeable. I have the impression that he is a daredevil and a false friend.
Kann mir jemand dieses summary von "A message from the Pig-man" korrigieren?
habe eine summary zum text a message from the pig-man von john wain geschrieben, wäre nett wenn ihr eure meinung dazu äußern würdet und ggf fehler verbessern könntet oder zumindest sagen, wo sie sind :)
The story „A Message from the Pig-man“, written by John Wain, is about a 6-year old boy named Eric, which has many questions he would like to ask but is afraid to do so.
Eric is the son of newly divorced parents. He has no siblings and his mum has a new boyfriend named Donald. He has difficulty with the new circumstances and does not understand why his father had to leave just because Donald moved in. He also does‘nt mind sharing his room in order for his dad to have the spare room. He is afraid of the pig-man and avoids him. He imagines the pig-man as a man who looks like a pig. One day, his mother asks him to catch the pig-man to bring him the scarps. First he was afraid, but when he sees the pig-man he realizes that the pig-man is a normal person and finally understands that the people call him pig-man, because he has some pigs that he looks after. Eric is no longer afraid of asking questions. When he comes home, he asks his mother why his father can‘t stay with them but his mother does‘nt answer him. Now he thinks that grown-ups are very silly and he hates them all.