Wurde der Text Grammatikalisch richtig erfasst?

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Abgesehen davon, dass der Text ziemlich langweilig ist, enthält er schon einige Fehler,

My name is ...., and I want to tell you something about my favourite food store today.

It's about the food store Real. Real was founded near Düsseldorf in 1992. In 1992 Real only had 10 employees and produced a lot of groceries.

Have you any idea how many employees work there these days? They have about 1500 employees now in the company and Real sells about 1000000 different products nowadays.

Real is my favourite company because they sell very good products and their employees are really friendly. I buy a lot of things there, but my favourite products are their doughnuts. The special thing about Real is that you can find ist stores everywhere. 

AE. ;-)

I'm ..., and I want to tell you about my favorite grocery store.

The store is called "Real". Real was founded near Düsseldorf in 1992 and had only had 10 employees at that time, offering many types of groceries. How many employees do you think work at Real currently? They have about 1,500 employees in the company! Real sells more than a million products. 

Real is my favorite company because they have really good products and their employees are really friendly. I buy a lot of items there, but mostly Berliner products. The nice thing about Real is that you can find their stores everywhere. 

That's the end of my presentation.

Thanks for listening. ...

Ich glaube mit "Berliner" hat er wirklich "Krapfen" gemeint. So nennt man die dort. Deshalb habe ich "doughnut / donut" geschrieben.

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@adabei

Peinlich (meinerseits). Daran dachte ich nicht. Gott sei dank bin ich nicht ein Berliner. ;-)

"Krapfen" heissen hier zum Teil "bismark (filled) donuts"

"Paczki" auf Polnisch, so weit ich weiß. Viele Einwanderer aus Polen hier, über Jahrhunderten.

Man sieht "Paczki" hier momentan.

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Ja, ich würde es genau so schreiben.

Es gibt schon ein paar Fehler.

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Ich hab mir ja nicht alles durchgelesen😅 Ich lese es mir schnell noch mal durch und überlege

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