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Hallo, Ich fühle mich in Englisch immer etwas unsicher und nun habe ich eine art "Charakterissierung" zu dem Durchschnittsbriten geschrieben. Wäre nett, wenn mal jemand rüberschauen könnte und mir ein paar Verbesserungsvorschläge geben könnte.
On Being British
A1 Looking for Mr. Average
In the text ‘Looking for Mr. Average’, written by Tim Wardle, a man collected statistics that tell us something about the average Briton. Later in the article is told that Wardle found the Mr. Average who matched all the criteria. - His name is Peter Williamson.
The first thing to point to is that the ‘Mr. Average’ has a wife named Michelle and is father of two boys - Tyler (he is nine years old) and Kieran (he is five years old). Peter Williamson is a office-worker and consider himself working-class. Besides he believes in god and is very proud to be british. It is very average that Williamson has 14 good friends and lives in his own house. A view other facts of Peter are that he know the text from the song ‘God saves the queen’, drives a Ford Fiesta and is 40 years old. Now a view data about the average Briton: A normal british person drinks three cups of tea a day, is more than £3,000 in dept, says sorry a 1.9 million times in its life, is caught on CCTV camera 300 times a day, need to go to the toilet six times a day and the male average Briton is looking for lost socks one month in his lifetime. Peter Williamson - the Mr. Average - wears a footballshirt a dark jeans and white sneakers. There is, however, another fact that should not be ignored: Williamson has size ten feet.