Wir müssen von der Schule aus einen Text schreiben der sehr wichtig für die Beurteilung ist. Könnte diesen bitte jemand auf Fehler durchlesen und korrigieren?
Aufgabenstellun: Schreibe einen "letter to the editor" in welchem du den Autor mitteilst, dass das Festival nicht so schlimm war wie er es beschreibt.
From: email@example.com To: Guardian@gmail.com Subject: Mr Peter Cummings’ letter of complaint
Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing with regard to a short text that has appeared on your site recently. This text claimed about the Rock Festival that was held at Hoxton Park in Cheshire last Saturday.
In the first point the author claims that he could not sleep because the music was too loud and the festival ended hours after midnight. I strongly disagree with his opinion. The festival began and ended exactly according to regulations. It started at 11 eleven o’clock AM and ended at 1 o’clock AM and the music was not as loud as it is presented in the article.
I have to say that I am very sorry for the author that people parked in front of his garage but there were enough parking spaces provided so it is not our fault. This could happen anyway.
I am completely in agreement with him in face to his worries about the defaced park but it is important to say that the organisers will pay and take care of cleaning up for the whole park. I assure that the park will be in as an good condition as it was before the festival.
I hope my points will be taken into consideration by deciding if the park should be used for such events again.
Yours faithfully, Aron Kerschbaumer
Konnte beim schnellen Durchlesen tatsächlich keine Fehler finden. War sehr gut geschrieben :) In welcher Klassenstufe bist du?
I am writing as an answer to a text that was recently uploaded on your site/page.
This Text claimed about - nicht so gut
In face to his worries- auch nicht
So its not our fault - argumenativ/ formäßog kritisch - es klingt etwas kindisch
I ( can) assure (you) wäre besser
The park will soon be in a good condition agaom, just as good as it was before the festival.
I hope my arguements will be considered regarding the decision if the Park may be used as a festival location again.
Name noch mal darunter
Jetzt hab ich keinen Bock mehr...
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Welche klasse/Schule ?