Wie gefällt euch dieser Songtext?
Hi! Es ist das erste Mal das ich ein Lied mit Text schreibe und bin noch etwas unsicher, ob die Lyrics die ich jetzt geschrieben habe gut genug sind. Ich bitte euch deshalb darum, mir eure ehrliche Meinung zu diesem Songtext mitzuteilen, dafür wäre ich mega dankbar :)
Hier die Lyrics:
All the time I was wearing my heart on my sleeve
But the limerence turned out to be poisonous to me
Any glimpse of hope just added fuel to the fire
The past few years were just a huge waste of time
What is time if not the sum of little moments
Each time the clepsydra loses another drop
What is eternity if not every second
Let’s take the chance to make our time count
Every time we meet adds another memory
To the chronic of failure written by anxiety
Every time we meet the wounds are getting deeper
Cut by silence, uncertainity, the willing of conformity
Every time we meet is a painful remedy
Feeding me with hope but cutting deeper the wounds that time can’t heal
There might not be much time left
But there are miles to go before we sleep
There might not be many choices left
Let’s take the chance this time
Every time we meet is another memory
In the history we’re writing all the time
Every time we meet is just another memory
So let’s add some iridescent ones to make them count this time
Ich spreche fließend Englisch. Und ich muss ehrlich zugeben: Ich hab keinen Plan, was du damit eigentlich ausdrücken willst. Für mich klingt das nach ein paar aneinander geklatschten Phrasen. Vielleicht fehlt mir da auch einfach nur der Zugang zu, immerhin ist das bei deutschen Liedtexten, die in diesem Style geschrieben sind, genau so.
Kommt meiner Meinung nach auf die Melodie an. Als Gedicht überzeugt es mich rein rhythmisch nicht, aber der Inhalt ist wahr und schön.
Ich finde es sehr langweilig.
Englisch English Grammatisch richtig?
Diary English. Ist das so ok?
Dear diary, A wonderful week is over. How time flies. we had a really nice stay here in NYC. I like NYC because it is so big and more futuristic as Germany. I very liked the Times Square. It was the best of all. We went there two times and it was very very futuristic because of the many add plattforms. Interesting was that the New Yorkers were very helpfully and nice. One thing was horrble in NYC. The traffic. You couldn´t drive with the car. because of that reason we just travelled with the subway. Every Day we went to a Deli´s shop to buy our breakfast. It was very nice and not so expensive. All in one it was a very nice week. We come back next year.
Kann mir bitte jemand diesen Refrain von Majoe kein Abschied übersetzen?
Übersetzung des Refrains gesucht!!
It was impossible to say Goodbye
And now I'm feeling so paralyzed
And every minute that you're not by my side
Feels empty every time
It was impossible to say Goodbye
I wanna let it fly
High up to the sky
I see you every time
Ist mein Englisch Referat gut so?
ich soll ein Englisch Referat über meinen Urlaub machen das muss 5 min gehen, könnt ihr es euch mal druchlesen?
My holiday in Italy
Seven years ago, making my family and I vacation in Italy. Together with other families we traveled by bus to Italy. After driving 18 hours and 2 breaks, we arrived at our hotel. The name of the hotel is Mauritius. The hotel is located directly on mauritius-known area of Rimini and nearby is San marino. When we moved into our room and the balcony beautiful pictures made, we first ran into the area around already know something. The next day, after breakfast we went to the beach, we were there every day because we had only a short way there. Once I even saw on the beach a little cancer. Sometimes there was also market by the beach. In Italy I have seen and experienced a lot and we had beautiful weather every day. My family and I were the evening, often on the road, because there will be not so warm. We were at a dolphin Shwow, we were once in a large market, which also was quite busy. There were also from time to evening events at the hotel who were really great, even the food in the hotel were very good. On the day of departure it was all still a pizza, then it was already back home. All in all a great holiday but I would never go on holiday there, because somehow it is my country not so, like in Germany, I am still the best.