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I'm finally back home in Vienna after spending two weeks in Turkey with my family . First, I'm going to talk about Sinop and after that, about Istanbul. We flew to Istanbul with a plane, and we spent our night at our home there. In the next day, we got ready really fast and made our way to Sinop with our car.
When we arrived in Sinop I made my way to my relatives to greet them and spend the night with my friends on the beach and played poker. Every morning I went to the beach to meet some friends. We swam the whole day and also drove jet ski. We spent the night on the beach.
The weather was very hot every day and it had also rained a few times. We also visited the city a couple of times to see the sights. We spent eleven days in Sinop and then we went back to Istanbul to visit the other relatives. When we got back to Istanbul it had been raining for two days and it was very hot at the same time. We were often in the downtown to shop, like the big Bazar where there are many shops and you can negotiate there with the dealers. I have been buying raisins and sunflower seeds every year, because they taste very good and are fresh there. In Istanbul we stayed for a total of three days and then flew back to Vienna.