Hallo liebe User,
derzeit bin ich dabei, besser Englisch zu lernen.
Kann mir bitte jemand sagen, ob der folgende Textabschnitt perfekt ist?
The next four days passed only slowly. The children had packed their bags long ago and could not await the departure. However, four days passed. Saturday morning, the children packed their last things. Meanwhile, Mr. Seifert checked the oil level, the tire pressure, and the cooling water of the car. Mrs. Seifert prepared the food basket for the break times.
A few moments later, everyone sat in the car. Their father drove, Mother sat to next him. Lisa and Enzo sat in the middle seats. Ingo and George sat in the backseats.
Lisa watched in the passing landscape. "How long we will drive till Daisendorf?"
"When we take some breaks, around about three hours and forty minutes," replied Ingo wisely.
"How far is it?" asked George.
Ingo adjusted his glasses. "It is 246 kilometres. With a journey time of 3 hours and 40 minutes, that's an average of 82 kilometres per hour we have to travel."
"Yes, that's right," praised his father. "You calculated very well."
"Thanks, Dad, but it's not my work," said Ingo modestly. "I have calculated with a route planner on the Internet."